LOL, I do hope you can update soon!! It's very interesting so far! Report Review
:)Author's Response: thanx ;) but ive abandoned this story cuz it basically had no plot line Report Review
I can kinda relate to her personality so it's really good to me. Author's Response: =D
thanks for the review! Report Review
it was rely gud.i liked it.it was really funny!!:D :D :D :D :D
BYE YELLO ORANGEAuthor's Response: aww thanks cuz!!
even tho i was there wen u wrote it... hehe
anywho, yellow orange is just LAME so don't call me that, think of a betta nik 4 me if ur gnna think of 1 at all =D
woo keep readin Blu Banana!! hehe... Report Review
yay an update!!! *does really mental happy dance* Really can't wait for the next chapter! Liz really reminds me of myself. Maybe it's the talking to the book thing. haha i think that's it! mwahahah 10/10!!
~MirandaAuthor's Response: yay!! thank you!! yeah liz actually kind of reminds me of myself as well... cuz shes sorta base on me...
thanks again!! glad you lyk reading this!
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Quite funny not boring at all, don't put yourself down about it!!! The whole broomstick thing had me laughing and you mentioned Fred and Geogre a good bit something for which i am very grateful!!! I love them so much! Well sone update soon, and please stop putting things like *clears throat* and *cough* in, it takes away from the story!!!
KatyxAuthor's Response: I'm glad you thought it was funny, yh the broomstick bit was my fav bit too!
Anywho, thanks for the suggestion, i'll definately stop putting those *action* things in, and if you see it one more tym, well... i allow you to give me a good telling off and a whack on the head...
anywayz thanks so much for review and the suggestion!! =D =D
...i wonder if theres a thingy here that allows you to rate reviews...? ;-) Report Review
Okay, this is a good chappie a bit all over the place but good all the same!!! I think we are both fans of Chaotic Fates so we have something in common!! Neway, you need to stop putting in all the actions she is doing, it takes away from the image!!! I hope you put Fred and George in it a good bit and of course Oliver, I love the three of them thats what lead me to your story in the first place...!!!
Right, ummm.... I think thats it??...yada yada yada...blah blah blah...yep thats it, I'm off downstairs to get some mint choc ice-cream coz I now have a craving!!! Well done, I'll stick with it!!!
KatyxAuthor's Response: Thanks! Yeah it was a bit all over the place, i guess i was trying to write everything about her in one go, and it got a bit disorientated...
anywayz thanks for the review! yes, we all love fred, george and oliver! but could you explain a bit wen you said i need to stop putting all the action shes doing? so that i can fix it up and make sure that i dont do it in the later chappies.
oh yum choc mint icecream... im drooling now... lol... Report Review
It's a bit sporadic at the mo' obviously, I mean, gosh, what story isn't? But you did have to do Liz's intro. Can't wait for chapter numero dos!Author's Response: Yes, it is a bit disjointed and random but hopefully it'll get better... Thanx for the review!! =D Report Review
I like it. It's intriguing, and I'm interested to hear more! Good plot!Author's Response: ooh THANKS so much for the review!!!
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i really like it! Can't wait to read more! And you do not suck at writing, you are actually very good! for some reason, Liz reminds me of my best friend, so i like the story even more! lol Please update soon! 10/10!
~MirandaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
I'll try to update soon, but it might take a while cuz we hav exams and stuff happening rite now...
Thanks so much again for the review!! =D Report Review
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