This is a cool story! I like it, so please continue! Report Review
LOL!!! That was funny, great job! Report Review
wow this is good, cant wait for the next bit :D:DAuthor's Response: Aw, thanks! Yes, this story is on my list of things-that-must-be-added-to. :)
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I like your chapters. They're humorous enough and not too long nor short.Author's Response: Why thank you! :)
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ODD THEROY on the story but overall well written. 7/10 so far. and how about the name Analicia or Kaelin? for future referance? im hooked btwAuthor's Response: Isn't it weird? I was just thinking about it...and I'm so glad you like it! :) For names...thanks! I'll definitely keep those in mind - I like Analicia personally, and Kaelin sounds celtic. :) Thank you for your review!
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Awsome! oh i forgot in the reply to my review that feel free to use that pharagrph/quote if you want just dont credit it to you please but whatever you do you do so ya...awsome stories by the way...
LilsAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) I love this story.....Thank you for the compliment. I don' think i'll use it, but thank you for offering - if I do, i'll credit you. :) Report Review
haha great chapter.....can't wait for more....this is fun!Author's Response: what is fun? :) I'm soooo busy, w/ writing a play for dramra, but i'll try to get more out SOON. I'll send you a WIP. Report Review
Oh, what an interesting, fun plotline! I can't give you too much valuable critique right now, as you've just started, but the plotline seems very interesting, and I like the Fudge/Nymph thing very much. Now this could be simply it is so early in the story, but Tonks seems to be lacking a bit of personality, but again, it may just be because it is only in it's beginning stages. Nice job on spelling and grammar, there were only a few minor errors. All in all, keep it up and I can't wait to see where this goes!
PS: As for the name, how about Isolde? Author's Response: Not only do I adore that name, it was FIRST!! Huzzah! :) Yeah, her persnoality doesn't really shine in these chapters, but it should come out more - especially because the other two tonks' are both so different from her! Look for "Isolde" in chapter 3!! Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Haha it's still funny!!!!!!!!! can't wait for chapter 2..even though i've already read it i know........yay! i'm the first review again! :) (10/10...duh)Author's Response: of course you were. thanks. :) glad you love it (I knew that...) and reviewed!! 1st one! Report Review
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