Hey your story's really good, I'm loving it! Just one thing, though, Kara sounds as though she's perfect! I know it's because of her background and all that, but I think she needs some kind of faults. No one's perfect, afterall.
Please post again soon!!!
GraceAuthor's Response: yeah I know she seems like that in the beginning but you find that out later. So far shes smart pretty and athletic but she does have a few faults dont worry. I just wont introduce it for a couple of chapters. I still need to add one character in the next chapter... The one after that might have a foreshadow of the faults... I think Im writing third year as I go along.... but hopefully I'll introduce it soon! Glad you like my story, I'll try to get the next chapter up by next week.
-Liz Report Review
I'll start working on a banner now YAY! Report Review
write more. I like itAuthor's Response: THANKS!!! I'm hoping to get another one up by the end of the week. If it's not posted by Tuesday just check the next week because it probably wasn't validated.=) Report Review
Can I PLEZ make you a banner???!!!
Give me your answer on the forums or if you don't know how to use those leave it in a reveiw for one of my storiesAuthor's Response: I'd love for you to make a banner =) Report Review
FINALLY SOME1 CAME UP WITH A LORD OF THE RING CROSSOVER!!
SO MANY FRIGGIN PEOPLE MAKE UP CHARMED CROSSOVERZ!
cool characters by the way ^ ^Author's Response: Thank you soooooooo much. I love the fact that at least one person enjoys my story=) Report Review
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