God, that's depressing
really well written, though

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That was really sad but beautifully written. It showed the emotions brilliantly. 10/10

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Really well written one-shot, would have loved to know why Harry was like that though!

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ok. it is ok.

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AAWWW!! THAT was SO SAD! I cried! Whos the mother?? Why is he drunk all the time?? ITS SOO SAD!

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that's wonderful...send it to ms rowling ^^

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wow. I love it. I like how you didn't give the boy's name in the beginning, made us think you were talking about Harry. Well, I can't wait for you to update again!!1

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Oh, as always this is wonderfully written, and full of emotion...but it seems almost, unfinished. I wish you had given a bit more information, so that I could understand what led Harry to this point. It is heartbreaking to read, (you know you have that knack to make me go "ugh") but I think it would have had a larger impact emotionally for me, if you had given some hint as to what had happened to Ginny (or whoever you picture the mother to be) ...what had led to this existance for Harry in general. Actually, I think this could make a rather nice short story now that I think about it. Ok, I'll stop rambling...overall, another great job with the emotion and setting of mood. :)

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ohhh ouch what a great story, really liked it especially that - “you’ve never really given me any cause to call you Father.” its like tisss ouch... lol

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That was sad, but brilliant, as usual. Amazing one-shot.

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I love it! Keep is going!

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Oh my. This is so sad. This is wonderful and so beautifully written! Amazing...

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Oh my. This is so sad. This is wonderful and so beautifully written! Amazing...

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that was really sad. could have had a bit more depth to it and a bit more of an explanation as to why harry is the way he is but it was still good.

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