{reviewid: 1567816, reviewer: 'kaz2603'}
11th August 2007:
Oo. Interesting. Love the Draco reaction!!! Plz update again soon. Can't wait for Harry's reaction to the engagement!!!
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{reviewid: 1552050, reviewer: 'd%2Fhr%20lvr'}
3rd August 2007:
omg this story is so good. god, draco is so hottt. hermione is really pretty 2 i love the change tho i wish it wuz me instead lolz. ive never seen a story like this before its really good, update soon plz!!
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{reviewid: 1551971, reviewer: 'Padfootsluv'}
3rd August 2007:
ahh... you should comeup with better chapter names in the future.
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{reviewid: 1551966, reviewer: 'Padfootsluv'}
3rd August 2007:
That was a short chapter.But it revealed a lot to the characters.
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{reviewid: 1551953, reviewer: 'Padfootsluv'}
3rd August 2007:
I love that twist. It's funny that the reader (me, lol) knows more than the characters.
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{reviewid: 1551933, reviewer: 'Padfootsluv'}
3rd August 2007:
That was kool. I really like the Draco/Hermy ships
Author's Response: So do I....I've always loved the thought of forbidden love....
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{reviewid: 1551708, reviewer: 'thebfsgf'}
3rd August 2007:
This was really good! Please update soon!
Rebecka M.
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{reviewid: 1551697, reviewer: 'rose_scorpius'}
3rd August 2007:
so COOL!!
please update soon
REALLY soon
I'm waiting!!
This story is awesome!=D
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{reviewid: 1551597, reviewer: 'AllThat'}
3rd August 2007:
i really really like it please update really soon
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{reviewid: 1551590, reviewer: 'Ldreamer3'}
3rd August 2007:
This is a GREAT story! I love that Hermoine changed and was always ment to be with Malfoy! Can't wait until the next chapter!
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{reviewid: 1531358, reviewer: 'Mrs%20SiriusBlack'}
24th July 2007:
sounds good! i can't wait to see what his reaction is!! update soon!!!
Author's Response: I'll update right now!!
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{reviewid: 1476088, reviewer: 'thebfsgf'}
22nd June 2007:
OMG! He frickin kissed her! Ok, I've decided: you must update soon! :D
Rebecka M.
Author's Response: Okay, since you decided, I definitely will!! Hehe!! :D :D
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{reviewid: 1476084, reviewer: 'thebfsgf'}
22nd June 2007:
Lol, that's funny! She called him daddy! AH! That's funny!
Rebecka M.
Author's Response: I hoped people would get my joke! Hehe! I'm glad you like my story
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{reviewid: 1473653, reviewer: 'Brooke_malfoy'}
21st June 2007:
continue pls.
Author's Response: don't worry, I will!
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{reviewid: 1473601, reviewer: 'london_lover'}
21st June 2007:
please update soon! this is getting really good! PLEASE! ~Allie
Author's Response: I will update ASAP
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{reviewid: 1473357, reviewer: 'ellie_malfoy74'}
21st June 2007:
omg i love this!! ginnys reaction was sooo funny.
and damn hermione is pretty hott now. yay hermione!!
Author's Response: I know, I thought I had to make her freaking gorgeous!! hehehehehehe!!
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{reviewid: 1472743, reviewer: 'who_I_am_today9393'}
20th June 2007:
OMG get another chapter this story is scary good!!! anyway nice job!
Author's Response: I will as soon as I can!! Thank you!!
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{reviewid: 1471920, reviewer: 'drkmystic'}
20th June 2007:
omg tat was so good you ave to write more it is must
Author's Response: thanks!!
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{reviewid: 1152013, reviewer: 'Bitter_Sweet_Love62'}
2nd October 2006:
Hey,
firstly it wasnt lame at all, for whom left that previous comment about this story! don't know what they were reading.
although i am not one to just say that and leave, i like helping poeple become better writers.
having said that, firstly i think that this story needs a little bit of spice to it, because the plot is very cliche and alot of other stories are like this one!@ i think you need ot come up with something more unique so maybe you should think up some idea's for the next chapters.
also i think you would benifit from a beta, your grammer and spelling is excellent but it is always good to have a beta to add or change a couple of things, and they are great people to help with ideas!
i look forward to reading the next chapter!
Bitter_Sweet_Love62
Zoe
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your input and it will help in later chapters!
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