17 Reviews Found

Review #1, by me The Discovery of Power and Allies.

1st April 2013:
wth is with you people why cant you type normaly ...pr ios my computer malfunctaning?

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Review #2, by kat potter Ron's Trial

19th December 2008:
please update soon. i this is a great story. 10/10

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Review #3, by angel_devil_chick15 Ron's Trial

3rd December 2008:
i love this story
continue it or i'll personally come and haunt u to finish or at least put up more chapters

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Review #4, by lovette Transfiguration Surprises

10th April 2008:
please continue love it

Author's Response: Thank you, I know things are a bit rushed and Im working on expanding things at the moment but am unsure on the way I want to go... I will update as soon as my writer's block goes away

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Review #5, by Alexi Transfiguration Surprises

8th March 2008:

Author's Response: Thanks.... I guess... Anyway, I'm having a bit of trouble on deciding which way I want to go with expanding on certain things... I will update as soon as I figure it out

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Review #6, by Shadowlight Transfiguration Surprises

7th December 2007:
Update plz. This is a good plot line. plz plz add more.

Author's Response: Im having trouble with writers block at the moment... I know there are things i need to expand on but unsure on the way i want to go at the moment

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Review #7, by residentevil fan Bout in the Hall

9th June 2007:
nice short chapter keep it up good job again

Author's Response: thanx... ill have the other ones up soon...

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Review #8, by Queen of Irish Dance Bout in the Hall

8th June 2007:
Please update soon!!! I want to find out what happens next!!!

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Review #9, by Queen of Irish Dance The Truth Revealed to Gryffindor

30th May 2007:
Please update soon!!! I want to find out what happens next!!!

Author's Response: No Problem itll be up soon

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Review #10, by Derek Hogwarts Express

25th March 2007:

Author's Response: I don't know I got it when I tried... maybe you accidentally hit cancel rather than ok...

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Review #11, by A The Truth Revealed to Gryffindor

24th March 2007:
Very good chapter

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Review #12, by DangerDog The Truth Revealed to Gryffindor

23rd March 2007:
nice chapter. the background of the story is still a little confusing. i find myself agreeing with ron in the sense that harry would never do that unless he was dark. there are some things that i like about the dark wizards but i tend to dislike them all. thank you for being original and making an entertaining story!

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Review #13, by lordpotter Friendly Duel

21st March 2007:
love it! I hope to see more soon

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Review #14, by mastersith Friendly Duel

10th March 2007:
intresting! update soon this is great!

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Review #15, by Alyson Hogwarts Express

28th February 2007:
Please update really soon

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Review #16, by For the Love of Merlin Hogwarts Express

25th February 2007:
I don't really understand the whole street hockey concept. In fact, a lot of the back story went over my head. Is it from some sort of Anime show? I also think that Ron should be kept on the good side. That last argument with Ron shows that Harry, Driv, and all of them are stuck up and Ron is just a normal guy who is trying to recoil. It was unsatisfying toward the end.

Author's Response: The street hockey concept is just an idea that went through my head... i thought it would be cool to write in my old street hockey team as a background for nicknames... I was planning on Ron dying out but I had some recoil about that... so he won't he'll just have to make a decsion...

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Review #17, by Ash Pendragon The Discovery of Power and Allies.

7th November 2006:
its good i realy like it but im a bit confused with the new charactor's did you make them up or they part of a tv show or something... anyway i would also like to ask if Harry is the main charactor or Driv. but besides all that its realy good i like it alot and i cant wait for your next chapter. well dune.

Author's Response: Harry is the main character... but Driv will play a major role in helping Harry understand what is gonna happen... Driv is an original character... my own creation...

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