Really good start, nicely done!!! Everyone seem very much in character, which is important. But I was wondering...was this a mistake: {“James, splendid to meet you,” the long haired boy said.} Wouldn\'t Sirius be the \"long haired\" boy? Maybe I\'m wrong, anyway... I look forward to more. :) PS. Could you maybe review something of mine? I\'d really appreciate it. Thanks, and again nice job! Report Review
this is really good - very interesting and i wanna noe what happens! i love reading abt sirius and james and lupin! Report Review
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