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Review #1, by Girl With a Pearl Earring It cant be real or can it?

26th September 2006:
My suggestion would be (if you want any helpful criticism, that is) to take this chapter off and edit it thoroughly. You have lots of spelling, grammar, and structure errors. I'm not trying to be a horrible old English teacher about it who doesn't have anything else to with her life besides grade papers, but it really distracts from the story. This is a good outline, but you need to put in way more detail, elaborate about certain things you think are important, character thoughts, all that jazz. Also some things are a little unclear...what did Harry mean by his 'aspect'? Just very jumbled up and needs to be fixed if you want anyone to read it. I hope you take these suggestions to heart and don't think I'm just trying to put you down because that really isn't my intention, I'm just trying to help you improve. I hope this helps and good luck in the future!

Cheers!
Lia

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