My first Remus/Tonks, and it was great. Thank you. Report Review
Beautiful story. I absolutely loved it :) I almost had tears in my eyes, and that's saying much for me. Report Review
Great again. You rock!! Report Review
So Beautiful i love it
x Report Review
You write best the mature parts. I envy you. :P
Again, a lot of emotion, you had me rushing through the lines, impatient to get to the end.
But, I have a question. If this is after Harry defeated Voldemort, and they are alive, then is it an AU? Or did I miss something?
Another thing, I have read numerous times that moment when Remus asks her to show her real self (if it's been in the previous version of this chapter, I do apologize for bringing it up), so although it's beautifully written, it's something everybody writes about, which is not your fault, of course...
Otherwise, I think that you convey emotion, namely lust and love, extremely well. I am glad you've started writing more such stories, they suit your style. Keep it up, hon!!! :) Report Review
I absolutely love it!! I haven't read a lot of Remus/Tonks, but I always like it when I do. There is something so honest and sincere about them. I love the way you write. I prefer to be a bit less plot driven and more character driven, too. I adore a good passionate story or one exploring the emotional climate of a certain circumstance. I think that is why I enjoy the one-shots or missing moment stuff so much. It's also a pleasure to read someone who can spell and really put together a well crafted piece. Kudos!! I will read more of your stories for sure. Adding to my favorites. Celeste Report Review
That's pretty hot, and also sweet when he appreciates her in her natural form.
Well done - pretty banner, too.
Paloma Report Review
I loved how passionate this was, and how you didn't say what ended up happening to Remus, because it wasn't important. Report Review
I liked it. I'm glad you didn't spoil the moment by adding anything from the next day and the battle. Good job!
~FireworkEyes Report Review
Wow, the language used in this was very impressive. give yourself a pat on the back. Report Review
Jessi, that was very moving and touching. It was nice that Tonks let Remus see the REAL her at the end. There were imperfections and Remus saw through it all. He still saw the beauty of the one he loved. Excellent one-shot, Jessi. Great job! Report Review
you should deffenitly continue this story. or make a sequal or something. PLEASE??? Report Review
Oh how kinky ;D
This was adorable. Well, adorable is not a word I would use, but you get my meaning right? Report Review
Very good, very good indeed. Spelling and grammer are good, as is construction, but to be honest, I felt this was a little too... dramatic for my taste, but that is but pure personal opinion. Report Review
aww! that is so sad and cute! I would have liked it better if they ran off and eloped, but I'm a 14 yr old hopeless romantic, so yeah. very good, 10/10! Report Review
Awww *tears in my eyes* thats so adorable =o) omg.. im gunna cry... calm down harri! CALMMM.. Ok. im good. reaaalyyy good story. wonderfully written =o)
Carrot Stix Report Review
It was amazing. Truly amazing. It was just so beautiful. It should be one of your fav pieces, you wrote it so well. I could see this happening, its a realistic situation and you can sense the passion and love they have. I felt sorry that he always had to leave her but it was a truly beautiful piece. One of the best Remus/Tonks I have read. good job. Report Review
love it much Report Review
LOVE IT! Report Review
Interesting idea about Tonks' true self. Very nice little one-shot! Report Review
awww really cute! Report Review
Aw...how sweet. I loved the way you described everything, the emotions so real. Everything flowed really smoothly and made sense, it was beautifully written. Very, very good fic, and though I don't love reading Remus/Tonks, I definitely enjoyed this. 10/10, for sure!
GWP a.ka. GRAWP =] Report Review
Awesome!! Loved the "physical" changes :) Report Review
It really is your best piece, but love scenes can be fun to write. There are a few more typos then usual, but than it is a bit harded to get the mature fics beta'd isn't it?
Otherwise, this is your best of those I've read so far. a 10! Report Review
Oh, it's definitely going into my favourites! I like Remus/Tonks, and this portrayed them perfectly. I like how Remus proposed to her, actually - I think I might find it even more romantic than proposing in front of a thousand people! And his one wish was heart-warming...
Did Remus succeed in killing Fenrir? I really hope he came back to Tonks all right. :) But the open end you left actually made this story more powerful than a "and they lived happily ever after" ever could have.
Great piece of work! Report Review
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