are teenage dreams so hard to beat every time she walks down the street.
i love that song.
as i am assuming your title came from the song teenage kicks.Author's Response: It must have done subconsciously, as I didn't download it until months after I started writing. Good song though, love the buzzcocks Report Review
I loved this chapter!! Especially the boat thing.."He thinks he´s a boat! How is that fine?" New chapter soon? ;)Author's Response: Hopefully yes... but it depends on my inspiration, fingers crossed! Glad you liked it though, thanks for reading :) Report Review
great job so far.
loved the james-lying-on-the-lake moment. i was cracking up. fantastic.
great story so far. cant wait til chapter 4! yay!Author's Response: Yeah... chapter four... I'll get to it eventually, glad you liked it though :) Report Review
>‘He’s not trying to kill himself,’ he said at length, ‘he’s moored.’<
I had no idea where you were going with the boat concept at first, didn't realise you were going to carry it so far, to such lengths. I laughed. Not just a mental laugh. An actual my-mum-is-really-sure-I've-finally-lost it-laughing-aloud-on-my-own moment.
I thank you.
Author's Response: everyone-thinks-I've-gone-crazy is the best type of laugh. I'm glad I made your mum think you're a nutcase though. Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Report Review
Oh I love it. I don't like Lily and James story's where there is no humour and you have tons of humourous sutff . I give you Madd Props lol don't ask I think I'm on a sugar High. I'm off to write chapter 6 talk to you laters. Keep me updated.Author's Response: Cheers :D glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Ha ha! this chapter had me in hysterics! you are a very good writer but can you clarify the relationship between Bonnie and Sirius? Olivia. Author's Response: I was afraid I hadn't made that clear enough :s whoops. They are just friends at the moment, though that may well change... I'll try and make it a bit clearer in the next few chapters. Thankyou so much for the lovely review, I'll go and finish chapter 3 now! :D Report Review
UPDATE SOON!!!Author's Response: I keep meaning to! I'll submit it for validation tomorrow I swear! Thanks for reading :) Report Review
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