Sirius's ego is pretty big bless him. I like Angels prank, I wonder what they sang about? James and Sirius are so funny together I'm glad that Dumbledore lets them get away with shouting out. I like James's threat! so funny, I hope they get together soon. Hehe I loved how the portrait was rooting for him! That is a funny password, and a funny dance! And can't believe Sirius argues with himself!! another good chapter alicia and anne Slytherin Report Review
Sirius is a little obsessed with Angel isn't he? and he seems quite hyper most of the time, maybe it's he's inner 'dog' :-p James is so jealous and protective bless him. I can't believe that Sirius just blurted that question out! Mmm interesting how she thinks he's only interested in her because she is off limits. Another good chapter alicia and anne Slytherin Report Review
This is a good starting chapter to the story. I like how you introduced each character and the description of them, although it would have been nice to have more of an introduction to Peter. Mmm a school head? that's an interesting idea, aside from a few spelling mistakes this was a really good chapter. alicia and anne Slytherin Report Review
Loved it!! So, so funny :D Report Review
great story i really enjoyed it although you have quiet a few grammatical mistakes James2009 Report Review
Aww, such a great story!! 100/10 -Lily__PotterAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your review :D Report Review
good start!!! love it so far!!! :-) xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Thankyou so much for this much needed relief from organic chemistry (gr). Fantastic story! You not only described all the original characters extremely well (ok, maybe not so much for Peter..) you also (much more importantly) developed your original characters too! Sorry that its over but glad that it began, much love, Nat. p.s. I am way going to go check out Dia =DAuthor's Response: HAHAHA! You are welcome! Thank you so much, I tried to a certain point (I hate Peter.. GRR). Thank you for your words, it means a lot to me. Awww, you are so cute. Yes, please do that! She is really talented, so much it makes me sick! Thank you so much, your review really means the world me! Report Review
Haha, green is Sirius's favourite colour! lol, then he must like you. great chappy.Author's Response: Don't you know? He loves me ;) Thank you ever so much for reviewing, you are definitely one of my absolute favourite reviewers. Report Review
Oo, he's doing it, he really loves Angel.Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Ooo, Sirius is in trouble!Author's Response: He is ;) Report Review
Lol, loved that conversation with himelf, soo lolish! greatAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
lol, woo great chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
hehe i like sirius singing. gawd i just love the fanfics about sirius actually getting over his obsession of just sleeping w/ girls and actually falling in love :) Author's Response: Hehe.. Thank you. I do too :) Thank you so much for your review! Report Review
I very much enjoyed the conclusion. Through out the story I couldnt help but laugh at Sirius's antics.Author's Response: Thank you. Hehe, Sirius is a lovely and funny boy, well in my eyes he is :) Thank you so much for your review! Report Review
lol love this beginning. can't wait to read the next chapter :)Author's Response: Thank you so much. You'll have to read on. Report Review
oh cant think of anythin really interesting to sayyy... but i really like your storyyy also just wondering you write all your "yeah"s and stuff with a 'j' instead of a 'k'? oh well awesome story nonetheless :D xoAuthor's Response: Thank you! Okay, I am not understanding, how can you write yeah with a j or a k? I not not following to be honest.. But I would love to hear it. Thank you so much for your review! Report Review
Funny, very funny. It was such a sweet story and sirius didn't let anything get in the way of his love for angel. He finally got the girl ! Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, the good always in when a girl writes a story :) Finally after been through all those chapters he finally gets his girl :) Thank you so much for your review. Report Review
Im just grinning :D Love it! Next story please!Author's Response: Thank you! The next story is already up ;) Thank you so much for all your reviews! Report Review
Yey! Happy ending ^^, Sorry it ended so fast... Author's Response: Happy ending! :D Yes, I know. Sorry. Report Review
Stupid me, thinking of Madam Pomfry x) Looking forward to the next chapter! :D Likelikelikelike Padfoot! Author's Response: No that's cute XD Thank you! Report Review
Madam Pomfry ^^, Im smiling. I like this story. *giggle* Poor Sirius. My innocent Padfoot! Author's Response: It is good you are smiling :D Thank you! He is still not yours! Mine! Report Review
I know I shouldnt feel good because Angel and Sirius didnt get to the pont where she said yes but I do... Because I love Sirius ^^, No, Im just kidding, I enjoy this story alot! Sirius... *sigh*Author's Response: Haha... I think you do the Sirius... *sigh* a lot! But he will never be yours, because he is mine ;) Thank you for your review. Report Review
Well, it didnt turn out so bad that I expected! Good ^^, Sirius... *sigh*Author's Response: No, I am nice ;) Thank you for your review! Report Review
Have to run to read the other chapters, but you are great! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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