they are incredible. so simple, yet to expressive Report Review
no ofense, but that was a little lame. it was to quick. there was no plot. any way you are a good writer, just try harder or change how you write Report Review
pretty good friend! i'd put the banner back on tho.Author's Response: ya i should put my banner on.thanks for the good review Report Review
Quite a lot of dialogue. I got a bit lost in it, you may want to watch out for that. Also, it was kind of short, but it was sweet. All in all, I would say that the story was good, but if you lessened the diaglouge it could be better.Author's Response: thanks i will try to work on that Report Review
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