I happened to re-find this fic. I didn't realize I had never read this eighth chapter. And I remember this being one of the best fics I had ever read, and I've read quite a bit of fanfiction. Haha. I just love what you've written and how you've incorporated so many of your own ideas to fit in with these characters we already know and love and brought in some new ones. The love between Hermione and Draco is just so evident and endearing - you can't help but root for them to keep going as they have. Same with Harry and Ginny. And while we do see these happy sides to all of them - we see the cracks that were formed from the situation years ago. It definitely shows in their children, who are so much like and unlike their parents. And while this story will probably remain unfinished, I still think this is one of my favorite stories I have ever read on HPFF. Report Review
I still wait for updates! Don't quit! You can't write something like this and then leave us hanging! This is the best hpff I've read ever! STOP BEING LAZY AND UPDATE! MORE REGULARLY! How is that for some tough love. I'm not going to stop harassing you until this story is finished~! Report Review
it's been more thn 2 n half years since u last updated.. plz tell me u havent abandoned it..
this is a great story.. n even though its been sooo long i still have hope tht u will update it..
n u also stopped in the most interesting part the anniversary :(... Report Review
Hey I really don't know if you will read this since the story hasn't been updated in a while but if you do I'd like to tell you that the story is really great!!! Would you please consider continuing it??:D Report Review
I read the first chapter I think about 5 yrs ago - could it really be that long? I've read like a zillion fanfics and yours is by far THE BEST!!! From time to time(like every week) I check out this site to see if you updated. I stopped reading fanfics, because every one is the same. You stand out from all the other writers. You have such a talent and the story just keeps you wanting for more. I really have no idea what is going to happen next! I like every character, I love their faults and their virtues. I'm really just stunned by your work and I hope that you will continue writing this story. I was afraid that something horrible would happen to the site and that every fic here would be erased(I had a dream about i-actually a nightmare) or that you will like die and won't be able to finish the story o.O so I copied & pasted your chapters into word - and the day you finish the story I will have the whole story printed out and binded with some pretty artwork with your name. You have to continue and finish this story. PLEASE THIS IS ALL I HAVE IN LIFE!!! Report Review
I'm astounded by this story, I can tell you that this is the only one (of the fanfics that I have read) that feels real and I don't know.. is very well written.
I just wanted you to do me a favor, I know (or think) that you will not finish this story, because it's a lot of work, I understand that ! I mean every chapter is huge (I'm quite greatful for that) and you wouldn't be giving the story or the characters justice if you finished it on a hurry, but the thing I wanted to ask you is if you could at least tell me what where your plans for this story? what was going to happen to the golden trio (hermione harry and ron)? would they had reunited? what was going to happen to Eva? and Dominic (even though I don't like him nearly as much as Eva I'm still curious) ?
I know that is a lot to ask but I need to know! please think about it.
PS your story really helped me deal with my Post harry potter depression hahahahaha lol !!!
And as some of the other reviewers told you, you really have talent for this kind of stuff ! keep it up, don't ever stop writing (you never know where it will take you) Report Review
Is there a chance you might continue with this story at some point? I would love to see how it ends, this story is one of my all time favorite next generation stories on hereAuthor's Response: Hi :) Thank you so much. I hope to get writing in the next few weeks as I've just completed my undergraduate studies. To deliver quality I need to get back into that head space and into the story that inspired me so much. I have to recollect and redesign as well, so don't hold me to it but I'm hoping for end of May. Thank you for the patience :) Report Review
Oh my. This is definitely something. I have just spent hours reading this and I crave for more. Alas, there are only 8 chapters here so I should be satisfied with that only.
Anyway, I love this story. I love how you created Dominic and Evangeline, Laura, Jill, Ryan and others. To know that Evangeline's hair is actually bushy, like Hermione's, is really entertaining. So thank you for writing this and I would say that please update soon but since I think you're dealing with a problem on your own, I'll just patiently wait for the next update :) Report Review
Wow. I mean, wow. I am blown away. 8 dedicated chapters with more than 10,000 words each? Detailing not only the lives of the "main" characters, for there are none, but for all the characters, fleshing them out, one by one, both in the past and the present, developing their relationships, making them unique and hateable from just 'one' perspective, but understandable from all the perspectives combined. I think the point where I fell in love with your story was in chapter one when harry, ron, and hermione had their split. it was so tragic, yet real. it is THAT easy for people to split apart, that easy to severe any connection. and i know it. it has happened to me, and you portrayed it wonderfully. that is when i knew your story would keep me going.
last night (or should i say today) i stayed up till 3 o'clock in the morning...thinking about how when i woke up today, i HAD to, at all cost, finish this, yet dreading finishing it because i knew there wasn't going to be more once i got to the end. THAT is the power your story has, because it is truly dramatic in the best sense of the word, because it is real.
please don't feel discouraged about your writing, or about this story, please! you know this will drive me crazy, because i will keep checking everyday. i don't want to put pressure on you, because that's bad for a writer. i just want to lift your spirits up, and tell you how great your story is. 10/10!
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C'mon dude are you gonna finish it or what ? it has been ages since you last updated !
Don't leave me hangingAuthor's Response: Hey man, I'm sorry, I'm going to have to let you down again...for a while. I can't write right now for some unforeseen reasons. I'm so distracted when I do sit down to write that the words simple arent right or working to that effect. I'm sorry. I know i lost a lot of readers and anyone reading this too, but I will not be able to sit with it until at least the end of August. I'm truly sorry... Report Review
Thank God you answered I thought you had abandoned this story ! I am a huge fan of your work, really ! and Iím sure a lot of people still check every now and then, I know itís a bit disappointing that nobody writes their reviews anymore ! But please have faith in this story !!
I will wait for the next chapter I know itís going to be awesome !
( I hope is Blaise and Bianca's anniversary ball )
oh and kudos !! eva is my favorite character ! I love her to death !!
keep up the good work and once again Thank you. You donít know what it means that you answered my review ! Report Review
Look, I don't mean to be rude or something but I would really like if you could put abandoned or something cause I literally check every week to see if you posed a new chapter or even answer to the reviews ... I know you have your own life and everything but plz finish it plz .. This is the only fan fiction story that I have really loved ! Please don't give up, I know you are dissmotivated since all the reviews where erased but please I could prove to you that there are a lot of people who still check every now and then to see if you have posted something. Please finish it or just one hater I only need another chapter ( ginny harry & hermione in the same place ! Yay ) and if you don't want to write Another chapter at least abandon it (take off the work in progress thing) you owe us that much. Please answer and if you decide not to keep up with this story just keep writing cause you have a talent.
thank you for such an amazing story
-just a huge fan of youAuthor's Response: Wow, I definitely needed that :s. I'm probably sounding like a broken record but I dont have enough apologies for readers like you. I'm at a loss for words really, cause I have no idea how it got so bad. But believe me when I say I think about this story every single day and the unfair treatment it is recieving. If I'm not dealing with my life, I cannot find the words to give it justice when I've tried sitting with it. And still thats not good enough. I dont want to think about the last time I wrote a chapter because the date will be terribly dissapointing. I dont think you'll believe me but I have sort of been working on it within the last week. I also need to get a chapter picture for the last one so I'm working on that too. So if it does update, don't jump and dont hate, it will be sent in again for the new chapter.
I want to thank you. By this time i was sure no one really cared about the story and it was all my fault. But i feel terrible knowing you do care lol, that you've been checking for it. My apologies to you and any one still interested. I'm getting to work right now. Report Review
I am very excited about your story ^^ I keep checking for the updates and I am a little frustrated when there are none..lol Please continue writing because it is really really really good xD
btw, I can't wait for Eva to fall in love (is it for the Potter? haha) Report Review
Wow, wow, wow, wow. This story takes my breath away. Before I give this story the praise it deserves I feel like I owe you an apology. This has always been my favourite story on HPFF and I havent reviewed in so so long. Please believe me though, its not because I didnt like any of the newer chapters, it really isnt. Unfortunately my life went a bit screwy and, up until a few months ago, I just didn't look at the site. It took two years, but Im back, although under a new name (my old one was Facetious Phoenix- for some reason I canít log into it any more). Sorry, enough apologetic rambling, just feel like I've let you down as fan. I know how important reviews are motivation-wise.
Anyway, back to the praise. This story really is astounding. The time, patience and hard work that must have gone into this really is apparent. Everything is so heartfelt; it makes the story come alive. The thing that strikes me the most though is the amount of depth and description in every chapter. It really is amazing and something a lot of professional authors struggle to achieve. I really do love everything about this. I love how you portray the characters with all their flaws and idiosyncrasies, and I love how the story lines all seem to tie in together. The flashbacks fit in so well too!
I read this story through from start to finish (once Id found it again) and wasnít sure whether to review at the end of each chapter. I had every intention of doing so, but I just couldn't stop reading! I still canít get over the fight between Evangeline and Dominic, that was just plain scary. God, when Dom cursed her with that electric shock I got so angry. I sort of felt like he deserved getting strangled. I know theyíre as bad as each other, but he did set himself up for that one. The amount of hate between them is incredibly palpable to the point where things are out of control. When I first started reading this story a couple of years ago I was sure that they'd get together in the end, but now Im starting to wonder if they can actually get over their differences, because they both seem too stubborn to ever relent. Oh, and the last chapter? Blimey. I was not expecting that between Draco and Hermione. How could he? Poor Hermione. After everything she gave up to be with him and hes letting another girl put her head in his lap. Pfft. I just hope theres a perfectly reasonable explanation :p
There really are so many questions I want to ask you, but I dont want to ramble on forever. Just know that you do have supporters who would love you to carry on writing this. It doesn't matter if it takes you months to crack out another chapter theyre always worth the wait. Thanks for the brilliant read, Ive really enjoyed it :D By the way, did you get a beta? If you didnt Id be happy to take on the job. Report Review
i looved the huge fight between eva and dom after the prefeccts meeting, there was some great 1 liners!
:) Report Review
at first i wasn't sure about wether to read the story but then i read the first chapter and i was curious so i read the next chapter and it ended up that i fell totally in love with your story. I haven't read a story like yours and i find it inspiring and totally original. You've got so many possibilities in the story that it's impossible to see which road you're going to take and i love that aura of mystery. I especially like how you've got Eva and Nic's anomosity and how it doesn't have any bounds. Can't wait to see what happens there :) update soon :)
[=Miss Ginny Potter=] Report Review
shocker!!! didnt see that coming. you know how to keep us readers on the edge of our seats and know how to knock us of our butts. anyway keep writing. your story is one i cant get enough of please update soon. Report Review
Aw...I am crying here at this chapter. So bittersweet...Well done Report Review
I could've swore I had left a review for this chapter. So much has been going on I completely forgot to. Anyway, I'm glad that Draco and Hermione are back... I always look forward to reading you're work. It takes me away and sometimes I get confused as to what really went on in the book and your story. Blaise and Bianca's anniversary ball is next right? Take your time with the next chapter... I won't rush you. I know that when you're satisfied with it and when you have time you'll update. 10/10 Report Review
FINALLY ! OMG
I was sooo happy when I saw that you had uppdated ! :D !
I liked this chapter, but I think it was a bit slow.
You are an amaizing writer, and encourage you to keep this story because it's truly a piece of art !
I hope that next chapter, will take place in Bianca's party !
Thank you so much for this awwsooome chapter and please update soon !! PLZ PLZ PLZ !
And once again amaizing !
Oh and i really liked the flashback, I want to know what happened with bianca/draco/hermione/blaze
LOVE YOU !!!
YOU ROCK DUDEEE Report Review
Hey im a fan of your writing and especially of Dominic Potter! But sometimes i wonder why the golden trio broke apart so badly..? as in, wasnt Harry fine with the Draco-Hermione thing? He seemed to understand Hermione, in a way he even agreed with her. And Ron too had accepted the breakup, not very gracefully, but not very badly either. Then why did things go SO wrong after Voldemort died? Why wasnt HERMIONE allowed into Hogwarts?!?!? How could McGonagaal n all forget Hermione's contributions? n How cud Harry Potter forget them? Srry if its too many questions :P Report Review
ummm lol sorry but im kinda confused on what ust happened! lol i enjoyed it, a lot! as i do all the other chapters but i just didnt really get most of what happened. but yeah. I LOVE this story the characters are so intracet its astounding and just the voice in the writting. Love it! I cant wait for the next chapter and am axiously waiting to see what happens at the ball. Is that going to be in next chapter? or is it all going to be about Draco and Bianca and all them? Report Review
I'd say you've definitely done it once again... Blew my mind away once again, took my breath away once again, left me craving for more... again and again... I've missed this story so much... I kept checking back almost every day for chapter 8... I got lucky today once I saw it here... I know what it feels like, to have someone whom one would share that unforgettable connection with... Probably the only person I trust more than my mother... I thank you once again for this spectacular chapter you have provided your dedicated readers with... It was definitely worth reading... Oh... One more thing... I can't possibly forget to say to you since I always do...
INFINITE RATING! Report Review
that was a great chapter! keep on updating!please Report Review
This story's great. And the whole 'Clay Forbes' thing is funny because I actually have a friend named Clayton Forbes who is definitely not sexy by any means.. >> Report Review
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