6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Rockinranda272 Chapter 2

21st March 2007:
It was a great beginning but... WRITE MORE!

Author's Response: Thanks! Luv u! I will on both!

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Review #2, by fanof24 Chapter 1

11th March 2007:
Hmmm. That's pretty good. I think you could improve upon the detail a bit more. You also did a fair job with showing the character's emotions; so far I believe that's your strong point. Anyways, keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'll try to detail it more!

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Review #3, by Cedrics_gurl Chapter 1

25th January 2007:
good...but one question...why is Ron in the same class as Alona? I'm sure you have a great explanation...i like the way you write...it's unique...i need help on my stories, please review!

Author's Response: sorry...i havent been on 4 a while. Well, i was thinking about it cause the Slytherin and the Gryffindor are in the same class, so Alona and Ron are to. If that doesnt answer your question please reveiw me again and i'll try to explain better if i can. Are you a beginner? 'Mystery at Hogwarts' was my first story. It was hard but I got the hang of it cause I thought of things that I wanted to happen in the movies or books, but I added a person in it.

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Review #4, by Regulus_Black Chapter 2

28th November 2006:
great story, please update soon

Author's Response: k ! thanks!

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Review #5, by lilmissfiesty10 Chapter 2

18th November 2006:
gosh this is great i love Alona good character keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks! THe third chap. is coming soon!

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Review #6, by imcute272 Chapter 1

24th October 2006:
I thought this story was good in a way but there is some spelling errors in the beginning.You might want to check those out!

Author's Response: okay! thank you! I have 2 more chapters coming up!!!

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