{reviewid: 2508013, reviewer: 'vanessa'}
| Review #1, by vanessa | Comet |
15th April 2011:
hey.
ur story is just amazing.
i love it!
its a bit... well.a bit childish.
since when did they all start crying soo much and started using the word 'dont even start'?!
i just hope ur not offended by this comment.
u figured out the plot well.
amazing and entertaining.
but a bit tooo farfetched and happily ever after.
not complaining.
ur imagination is awesome!
keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I'm not offended at all actually. It was my very first story so its not too well written and I agree, it is a bit childish. Hopefully I improved over the years. Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 2361406, reviewer: 'Stephanie'}
13th June 2010:
Id just like to point out that there is no way harry would a) tell james, lily, remus and sirius what happened because that could alter the course of history and b) I dont really see harry "sobbing" and "having to tell them what happened"
Author's Response: I know but thats the point of an AU fiction. Plus this was my first ever story so I didn't really know what to do for it.
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{reviewid: 2129652, reviewer: 'Person4567'}
30th May 2009:
That was better, just because you wrapped up the story well and it didn't go really fast like the last chapter.
Author's Response: thank you.
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{reviewid: 2129648, reviewer: 'Person4567'}
30th May 2009:
That was okay but not as good as the other chapters. You just made the chapter go too quickly.
Author's Response: Yeah i know. I didn't really know what to do.
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{reviewid: 2128561, reviewer: 'Person4567'}
29th May 2009:
Great chapter! Going 2 read more now
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2128560, reviewer: 'Person4567'}
29th May 2009:
are they in the riddle house...us or the chamber of secrets? I'll find out
Author's Response: Riddle House
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{reviewid: 2125648, reviewer: 'Person4567'}
26th May 2009:
That's really funny and creative. I can't wait to read more tonight. So deffinetley ten of ten.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 1922076, reviewer: 'lifter57'}
| Review #8, by lifter57 | Comet |
13th May 2008:
this is terrible - very very poorly done
Author's Response: It's my first ever story but thanks for letting me know It wasn't too good. I'll try make it better
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{reviewid: 1762507, reviewer: 'harrypotter13'}
22nd December 2007:
Please make a sequel I would die if you didn't
I loved the story.
It made me cry and laugh at the same time.
Great story!
Author's Response: Awww thankies!
The sequel is already
4 or 5 chapters in.
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{reviewid: 1755823, reviewer: 'Sirius_Padfoot_lvr'}
16th December 2007:
holly cheezeball i was right!
i never guess anything right!
kewel...
u rock!
Author's Response: LoL...You were! Congrats. Thnx for reviewing. :D
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{reviewid: 1755821, reviewer: 'Sirius_Padfoot_lvr'}
16th December 2007:
okay, i'm gonna guess who was taken
was it Ginny?
i think i might be right
who am i kidding? i'm a horrible guesser!
is it Ginny?
i guess i'll just read the next chapter to find out!
Author's Response: You're right! But also Ashleigh
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{reviewid: 1755816, reviewer: 'Sirius_Padfoot_lvr'}
16th December 2007:
good job!
luv the story so far
just need to read the other 2 chapters
Author's Response: thanx
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{reviewid: 1707909, reviewer: 'QuidditchRocks777'}
| Review #13, by QuidditchRocks777 | Comet |
11th November 2007:
WOW! really good! =) times a million!!
Author's Response: Yayz! I'm sooo glad you liked it.. It was my first fan fic and I didn't really know how it would be like but I'm glad people like it.
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{reviewid: 1697038, reviewer: 'ginny_roxmysox'}
3rd November 2007:
I loved this! It was sweet, funny, and of course, beautifully written. I liked how Regulus was helping them-so nice! Wonderful job!
10/10
Sabrina :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it.
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{reviewid: 1592574, reviewer: 'ummm_lauren'}
| Review #15, by ummm_lauren | Comet |
23rd August 2007:
make the sequel, make the sequel!
Author's Response: The Sequel is already up. I'm working on the next chapter of the sequel now
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{reviewid: 1568898, reviewer: 'JLHufflepuff'}
12th August 2007:
I'm sitting here giggling!
Author's Response: Thnx.
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{reviewid: 1550353, reviewer: 'addicted12'}
3rd August 2007:
ooh, that whole dare sequence was awesome!
Author's Response: Thnx. I loved it too. LOL.
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{reviewid: 1344846, reviewer: 'Proud%20Hufflepuff'}
17th March 2007:
That was really good! I loved it. I'm about to read the sequel. I'm sure it'll be fantastic! 10/10. Great work!
Carrie
Author's Response: Thanks Carrie. I'm glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 1344231, reviewer: 'WriterGirl9407'}
| Review #19, by WriterGirl9407 | Comet |
17th March 2007:
it's realli gd
Author's Response: thnx
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{reviewid: 1312420, reviewer: 'malfoy%20lover'}
| Review #20, by malfoy lover | Comet |
19th February 2007:
that was great. i loved it.you have some really great ideas. they are really oraginal. i think you should write a seqle where the younger marauders, lily, molly, ashleigh, and dana come and vist them in the future.
Author's Response: That's actually what I am going to do. I actually just started to write a sequel like that today. thnx for reviewing.
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{reviewid: 1308775, reviewer: 'chelsie_potter338'}
16th February 2007:
you really should make a sequal
Author's Response: I was thinking about it. But right now I'm working on a story to finish before I post it.
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{reviewid: 1293399, reviewer: 'rosai_gryffindor'}
4th February 2007:
brilliant! loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you
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{reviewid: 1292282, reviewer: 'jimmy%20chase'}
| Review #23, by jimmy chase | Comet |
3rd February 2007:
you've got to make a sequel
harry told his parents about wormtail - THEY MUST BE ALIVE BECAUSE THEY WOULDN'T TRUST HIM! and sirius would be alive and living a normal life
you must do a sequel with these parts of the story - where they all remember the adventures they had toghether :-)
excellent story - please write a sequel :-)
10/10
Author's Response: Thnx
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{reviewid: 1292277, reviewer: 'jimmy%20chase'}
| Review #24, by jimmy chase | Comet |
3rd February 2007:
you've got to make a sequel
harry told his parents about wormtail - THEY MUST BE ALIVE BECAUSE THEY WOULDN'T TRUST HIM! and sirius would be alive and living a normal life
you must do a sequel with these parts of the story - where they all remember the adventures they had toghether :-)
excellent story - please write a sequel :-)
10/10
Author's Response: Knowing me, I probably will make a sequel. Thnx for the 10. I am so happy. I love Sirius so he is definately going to be alive.
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{reviewid: 1289987, reviewer: 'secret_witch'}
2nd February 2007:
Really enjoyed that story. I think a sequel would be a good idea. 10/10
Author's Response: Yeah I might make a sequel but the opposite way. thnx
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