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Loved it! And I forgive you for the long wait! lol I can't belive that she's a deatheater! Dun dun dunnn.Sorry, i had to do that. Good chapter, please update soon! 10/10!! ~Miranda Report Review
LUVIN IT!! UPDATE SOON!!HEY GIMME BACK MY CHOCOLATE!! Report Review
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Great story so far, love the fact that there are also bad points to their relationship like the fan clubs not likeing it. and that Lily actually loved James since 2nd year!. please carry on with the story as soon as possible.Author's Response: thanks soo much for your review! It's great to hear what people like and dont like about my story!!D I actually have the next chapter in validation- keep yur fingers crossed! Report Review
This chapter was so cute!!!!! a little short, but that's ok, I'm just glad that it was there at all :D Report Review
ok so i didnt read the story but your banner is awesome just to let u knowAuthor's Response: THANKS!!!! i made it myself! it was really fun, and now i'm really getting into ps graphics! Report Review
This story is AMAZING!!!!!!!!! It's such a cute idea!!!!!! Please update soon! Oh, and the i totally agree with your disclaimer, You should own harry Potter!! lol Glad to see Tonks and Remus together! I have no critcism. This story is defiantly going under my favorites!! 10/10!! update soon please! ~MirandaAuthor's Response: thanks!!!! my disclaimer was just some odd supposed to be funny thing... if i really did own harry potter, really it'd probably be pointless... not to mention plotless. But thanks anyways!;D Also, i love the remus/tonks pairing snd love to imagine them meeting at hogwarts.... though I have no idea about the age difference... Thanks for putting me under yur favorites! thats awesome! Report Review
woah there already goin out that did seem a tad bit rushed but your writing was fine update soon!Author's Response: yeah, it was a bit fast... but in the next chap it explains alot about the past that put them in the situation....at least I think so...OOOhhhh and also, I'm gona write a 'prequele' so you know exactly what happebed in 6th year... Chapter 3 is almost done... I want it to be really LONG! Thanks for the reveiw! theUionceknew Report Review
Just for you... a review!! Wow, I rhymed! I'm a poet and I didn't even know it! This story is great! I love it! Report Review
this is SOOO good. i beg of u plz hurry up Report Review
haha. nice idea. wish detentions here were that original! lol! Report Review
It was cool and funny!!!!!!!! It was SEXY!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
It's really romantic and really good!!!!!! I's Love it!!!!!!! Can't Wait till' the next chapters!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Thanks! It's allways nice to hear positive feedback! Chapter 2 is now up, and chapter 3 is halfway there! theUionceknew Report Review
haha can't wait to see what happens next James is gonna flip OUT!Author's Response: hmm... might not turn out like you think... Thanks for the positive review! Chapter 2 is now up and chapter 3 is halfway written! theUionceknew Report Review
Haha very cute. I really like this so far and I've already added it to my favorites. Update as soon as you can, I'm so curious to see where this is going!Author's Response: Aww! Thanks! It's great to know my work is appreciated enough to be on someone's favorites! Just so you know, chapter 2 is up and chap 3 is being written... should be a couple more nights.. theUionceknew Report Review
gr8, keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=) Report Review
Ha Ha that's really funny! I love how james was just wanting to take care of lily! so sweet! :) Report Review
HAHAHA! Such funny fanfic, and exacly what Sirius would do! Update soon! Report Review
WOW!!! Thats all i can say...That was....really good!!!!Author's Response: Thanks! that's EXACTLY what I want to hear! LOL hope you like the next chap as much- it's up now! Report Review
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