It's good, pleaz update soon!
~AmyAuthor's Response: I promise promise promise to update as fast as I can Report Review
oh, nice story...but then, all ur stories r good, arent they? btw, how many danielles r thr in this story? danielle evans, danielle, lily's cuzin, and danielle, remus's next door neighbor who is also lily's friend!! Author's Response: There is only one Danielle. Lily's cousin, the name was supposed to come out as Daniel, but I guess I messed up. And Remus' next door neighbor and Lily's best friend are both the same Danielle. Report Review
Nice. Very nice. Though, i got a bit confused with switching and all.Author's Response: I'm sorry if you got confused, but it was just too short with just staying on one person. Report Review
x :) x Author's Response: Thank you Report Review
Nice chapter. You're still getting your then and than's mixed up though. Anyways, i liked it. good job.
I'm going to email you a new story idea i have, just to see what you think. i'm not to sure of it, though it'll only be about five chapters. haha. Author's Response: I know I'm getting my then and than mixed up, I just need someone to look that over for me Report Review
Good start. I hope you post the next chapter soon! :-)Author's Response: The new chapter will be up as soon as possible Report Review
Yay!! Sammie!! It's up!!
But I'm confused. . .if tomorrow is only the first day of seventh year, then why is it October 31? Did you mean August? And I noticed you keep talking in past tense when it should be present tense. ie: I still hated quidditch, hated Potter, loved reading, tutored, hated Potter, did my homework on time, went to Hogsmeade, hated Potter, got good grades, Wouldn't be "hates" or "hate"??
Otherwise, this is great and looks promising. I can't wait for more!! Author's Response: Thanks for this Carolyn. Report Review
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