Ew! Snape's yucky!

So...did Emily realise Remus was a werewolf just then, or did she already know?

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So, was that a flashback? It's just a tad confusing - maybe you should put it in italics?

:)

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Wow, the formating(?) of this was wakey! There are massive gaps in the middle of nowhere.

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I like this chapter.

:)

Normally, I'd not review but I'd keep reading, but, this stroy is one of those reviewable stories.

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Hey there. I decided to continue reviewing, if I'm asking you all those questions!
Very nice chapter, I loved the beginning, and Emily's behavior towards Snape. However, I think Snape would never say 'Madam'. Other then that, it was really good!
I might consider getting a beta if I were you though. Just to smooth everything over.
Keep up the good work!!
xxLils

Author's Response: well first off thanks so much for the review[they always make my day better].

so its not believable? not even if hes saying it in sarcasm.okay ill fix that.

i've considered a beta quite often[infact all the time :D] i just need to stop being lazy and go find one and fill out the application for one.
thanks so much for the review ::hugs::

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And the tension builds! I absolutely love the line about Snape's hair "staying in one gooey, sticky spot"! So great. Just like your story. 10/10; and keep the good writing coming!

Author's Response: thanks so much!
:D
im so glad you like that line.
usually when i write i throw in little joke to see if anyne will say something about, or appreciate it.im glad you enjoyed that one.
thank you so much for the extremely lovely review.

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Ohhh No poor Remus, but why did Snape have to be such an Ass, of wait no why did he have to be a git? I take it that Sirius will be all beat up in the next chapter and Remus will be tired from not sleeping, or maybe he did sleep. Tell me.

Author's Response: not sleeping.
that ones right

:D

read the next chapter to find out the details?thanks for the review.
it means the world.

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Peter is so cute, but he is so very evil..I wounder if he will betray his friends in this story? Tell please?

Author's Response: in future chapters you shall find out
:D

peter is just one of those boys that you can either hate or love, but you'll prob. end up doing both.
:D
thanks for reviewing

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I am pleased to tell you that I loved the way that you wrote James, and Sirius very well done. I also think that you did a great job on description once more.

Author's Response: thanks so much.
i appreciate it!
alot


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I think that the Oc character that you have going are just wonderful. You do the most wonderful job describing the emotion of the people, and I love the way that you began this chapter with a quote, and then a very descriptive talk making the reader want to know more, and read farther.

There weren't any mistakes that I could found, so I wasn't thrown off balance. I am please to award you my first ever really meaning it 10/10 way to go.



Author's Response: you cant see it...but right now i have the biggest smile spread across my face.
thanks so much! you have no idea how much it means to me that i did that for you as a reader, and that you feel i did such a great job!
thanks so much x a billion.


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Interesting yet again. I figured that one of the marauders would like her---that's where a plot comes into play. :)

Author's Response: ha! then i am all too predictable
thank you so much for reading and reveiwing
:D

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Interesting start, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

~Varda~

Author's Response: thanks so much!
:D

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Oh! The parkinson boys!! Haha, that made me laugh! ..Anyways, very nice chapter, besides a few missed words. You write convos and thoughts very well, like you can understand exactly what is trying to be said. I can't wait for more! Keep writing!!

xxVL

Author's Response: thanks so much! i so glad you enjoyed it.
yeah not many people got that connection. but im glad you did!
:D
thanks so much for the compliments.

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Ooh! The plot thickens! I like it! *hurrys to read more*

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Oh i like. Wonderful beginning, and beautiful descriptions. I must say, i can relate to miss Emily, whose name i love btw. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: im glad you like her name.
im im even more glad that you want to read more...
:D
thanks so much for the reveiw.

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Hi! I'm liking this story. Emily is not your usual popular-every-likes-me character, and that makes it interesting. And she's engaged to start with, now that's unusual! I think you're very good at writing conversations.

Author's Response: thanks im glad you think so.
truthfully i dont think any part of my writing is strong.[i just dont want to sto cuase i know how it feels when a good story is left abadonded.]
thanks for the reveiw!
thanks so much

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It's really good so far!
Please keep writing don't quit like others do.
Also, please read my story too!

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Aww, poor Emily!



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Wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter!

~Meli

Author's Response: well thanks so much.
keep a lookout for the new chapter soon...
:D

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It was interesting..

Author's Response: thanks
:D

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Aw...her sister is so mean...and Remus has a crush on her? (yeah, like he'd be disappointed in her logic..pfft) And now she's opening the book, I wonder what's inside? Fabulous chapter, 10/10

Author's Response: thanks so much...
im glad you like it so much..
:D

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I can't wait to see where this goes. I really like Emily...

Author's Response: haha...
[sorry i wasnt laughing at you i was laughing at your penname.]
:d
actually it made me smile. im glad you like it so much...
next chapter should be up very soon.

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Whoa! great story so far, it's coming along very nicely!
please update soon!

julz

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YAY! *does a little jig around the room and falls* that was great, although i usually don't read stories until they have atleast 5 chapters just to make sure they aren't abandoned, soething compelled me to read this story, and i must sayy it was awsome! don't let me down! and update soon!

all my support: mekayla

Author's Response: ah!
thanks so much.
you have no idea how special i feel.
i wont disappoint you.
[ill try at least]

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i want her to be engaged to snape :]


Author's Response: ha. well i dont know. what does your gut instinct. what does it tell you?

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