LMAO!! DUDE! IT AIGHT' AIGHT'!Author's Response: iiight ma dukes thanx for da review ima do ma best 2 keep it 2 ya liking Report Review
I'm not logged in currently, but I like your story. I recommend checking the forums for a Beta, or type this in Microsoft Word or E-mail, they have spell check. I've noticed quite a few spelling errors. I do really like your story.... Keep writing. I'm sorry if you find this harsh, but someones gotta do it. I must stress that I do like or story, or I'm just complaining. Also, if you want a few more reads I suggest The-Dark-Arts.net for a banner, they tend to bring attention to your story. I hope you don't take this harshly, I'm just trying to help you improve. ~Shadow HazelAuthor's Response: thanks ive been lookin everywhere for wun,i even tried 2 make wun myself.i appreciate it alot Report Review
hey i really like to story keep writing it!!! its great!!!Author's Response: thanx i will Report Review
wow. It is ok.Author's Response: thanx Report Review
really good story u should rite more n update soon plzzAuthor's Response: thanx i will Report Review
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