Reading Reviews for I Want You to Want Me
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Review #1, by Amberfire Nearly Impossible

29th August 2009:
hmmm this is interesting...and good!
i like it!!
hehehe mutant demon babies indeed!!! lol
love Amberfire

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Review #2, by Chantiella Nearly Impossible

12th August 2007:
Love this story! The simple, yet suspenseful ending sentence rocks. Please keep writing this story, I love it! And update ASAP! Good job, cant wait to see where Lily/Sirius comes in.

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Review #3, by Bloo Nice To Meet You

2nd April 2007:
I love the first chapter. I haven't read many fanfics that start off with the Marauders in their first year, so this is a delightful change! :0) My only complaint would be that Lily seems a little frail.

Author's Response: hah yeah... i'm not gunna lie and say i was going anywhere with that.. but yeah I just think it would be impossible for her to flourish in her household, being constantly put down and everything.

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Review #4, by Radcliffe_PotterFan319 Are You Going To Eat That?

24th September 2006:
It was really good! I'm interested in Sirius's dream. . . anyways, i liked the whole thing with peter. haha. stupid moron. great job. i love it!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I just decided i was going to use foreshadowing and whatever but mine may be too obvious.. get back to me on that at the end of the story haha

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Review #5, by angela Nice To Meet You

12th September 2006:
awesome story!!! I love it!

Author's Response: wow! thank you!

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Review #6, by ems25 Nice To Meet You

12th September 2006:
well i think you should continue it;its started off really good and i like the idea of Sirius and Lily being friends. I agree abut writing the same thing in other peoples view points, it is probably easier either sticking to a general or different person per chapter. Anyway like i said hope you do continue

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! I'm loving all these reviews!

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Review #7, by Radcliffe_PotterFan319 Nice To Meet You

11th September 2006:
They both knew they were White-clad in a family where Black was uniform. That was the best line I've ever read on this site that describes the Black family. I loved it. Very good.

Now, for the whole story. It was great and I absolutely loved it. All the characters were in character and everything. It was well written and no mistakes that i saw. Great job. Keep posting because this is going into my favorites where i will patiently wait for you to update.

Author's Response: Oh I'm glad you liked that. I kind of felt like I was rambling this whole chapter but guess not! haha thanks a bunch, I'll update soon!

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