I like this. I really do. :)

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this is such a good start! really intrigueing what is going on with Dementia! love it, really unusual

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Ok this has got to be one of the better fan fictions on this site. The problem? It's one chapter long. It's a prettyhigh compliment to say that it is one of the better ones when I havent even gotten enough fabric to see the outfit. This really needs to be updated and soon. Not because i mean to nag on you but because you are brilliant and the rest of us really want to only have that in essence. Just thought you should know. ;)

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interesting take on the charachters. much diff then the norm. but i think i like it ! update soon plzz

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Wow, that was a great first chapter. I really loved it, though its a little confusing why everyone's so fascinated by Dementia even though she's obviously very... out there. I understand the intrigue very well, because obviously she's different and hence the blatant curiosity, but I think it'd be far more believable if strictly one or two of the wizards vied for her affections. But in a twisted way, like your setting up, like Lucius finding her despicable at first, but very slowly but surely warming up to her ways and seeing the beauty of her whimsicality. And Andromeda and Sirius probably shouldn't be as well recieved as they are, but I guess the whole friends since birth thing bonds them. But it was beautifully written and I eagerly await the next chapter!

-Tiara Tears

BTW: The banner... wow... it's pretty much amazing ♥

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i love it. its great to see this different side of the wizarding world. i would write more but i really am supposed to be doing my homework. keep up the good work!

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i love it. its great to see this different side of the wizarding world. i would write more but i really am supposed to be doing my homework. keep up the good work!

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