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Review #1, by HP_4Eva Close To The End

20th February 2008:
Haha. I JUST noticed that I put my old review on the wrong chapter! Stupid of me. Anyway, loved you story! Will there be a sequel?

Author's Response: if u read the Harry Potter books then it will finish it up for u about Tonks and Lupin :]

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Review #2, by daina Home...

23rd December 2007:
well before I actualy start reading this story, I just wanted to say...
the title of thsi story is absolutely beautiful! It just captures everything about Remus for me...but that's just a personal opinion =) So nicely done =)
and now to start...

Author's Response: oh well I'm glad that u like the title! that makes me really happy! i really hope that ur not disappointed!

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Review #3, by lilypadandprongs4eva The End...

10th October 2007:
u r evil. what happened 2 happy endings
love the story though

Author's Response: haha...well i leave the "ending" to J.K. Rowling ;)

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Review #4, by tonksloveswerewolves The Owlery

9th October 2007:
um...the gidget confuses me. elaborate? 10/10

Author's Response: "Gidget" was an old movie, the main character was nick-named gidget and was an annoying...kinda slutty girl :)

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Review #5, by HP_4Eva The End...

9th September 2007:
0_o I wonder what happens next! Bring on the drama! Can't wait till the next the chapter!

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Review #6, by MoonysChick19 Dreams

5th July 2007:
Uh oh, now what happened? Something that has to do with Tonks, or James/Lily related? Can't wait for the next chappie!

Author's Response: haha yep just wait and see! ;)
Hey-Thanks for staying with me through the whole story! :D

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Review #7, by The Knights Wife Girls, Girls, Girls!

5th July 2007:
ok...slightly incredible character development! I can't wait to read the next one! *hits over own head* so logically i should move onto the next chapter huh? Brilliant writing!

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Review #8, by The Knights Wife The Curse

5th July 2007:
wow. You are brilliant

Author's Response: why thank u...thank u very much! :)

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Review #9, by The Knights Wife Home...

5th July 2007:
oh god...this is starting out so well! This looks to be an absolutely brilliant story! I'm going onto the next page...

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Review #10, by Gred_Forge Cuts, Bruises and Memories

3rd July 2007:
great job! Its really... sorta... no other word to describe it... powerful

Author's Response: thx! now i guess i can call myself a "powerful writer"...?

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Review #11, by Kyo The Curse

2nd July 2007:
Hmm . . . Molly knows something.

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Review #12, by Kyo Home...

2nd July 2007:
This is really neat. I've wanted to find a RLNT where they were both at Hogwarts. However, I've been noticing a few things. Some characters seem OOC at points, but mostly because the exclamation point is a little . . . abused. Also, when you had characters speak, you did this sometimes:

Sirius then punched Remus, who yelled,

"What the-"

That's not proper, and it would have been better put as maybe:

"What the-" Remus said, getting cut off when Sirius punched him in the arm.

I thought the full moon in the Great Hall was very clever.


Author's Response: Thank you! I will keep that in mind for the future! :D

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Review #13, by ROSEMARYBERRY!!! Cuts, Bruises and Memories

20th May 2007:

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Review #14, by ROSEMARYBERRY!!! Cuts, Bruises and Memories

20th May 2007:
I love it so far, but I really need to re-read the story so I can REALLY get into it. I really think the story is excellent though. I love the use of the word 'bitch' lmaooo!!! HAHA if Sirius said that to me... I'd be like NAH UH YOU BASTARD!!!

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Review #15, by MoonysChick19 Cuts, Bruises and Memories

20th May 2007:
Wait. WHAT??? MARY AND SIRIUS ARE ENGAGED? I did NOT see that one coming! Ah, and poor Remus. And poor Tonks. They still aren't together. James and Lily ARE getting closer though. That's good. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: thnk u! I love how you stuck with me :)

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Review #16, by Hermy818 What Are Friends For?

30th April 2007:
Very good! Keep writing! I love it! 10!

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Review #17, by senator The Owlery

27th March 2007:
Wow! that was great.

Author's Response: well I am very happy that you liked dear senator!

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Review #18, by senator Girls, Girls, Girls!

27th March 2007:
oh! suspense!

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Review #19, by senator Home...

27th March 2007:
so good! But I have no idea who anybody is! I'll ask you later

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Review #20, by Brookie11 The Owlery

25th March 2007:
more Tonks and remus belong to gather

Author's Response: psh! OF COURSE THEY DO! ;)

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Review #21, by MoonysChick19 What Are Friends For?

2nd March 2007:
Uh oh. not good. I hope Remus is okay. Great chappy! Please update soon!

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Review #22, by MoonlitTwilight What Are Friends For?

1st March 2007:
OMG!!! You. Need. to. Update. As. Soon. As. Possible.

Update ASAP!


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Review #23, by Just a Guest Home...

24th February 2007:
I like it. I like how you made the Remus/Tonks romance start at school unlike most stories which happen after their grown

Author's Response: thank you, thank you very much :)

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Review #24, by addicted to potter The Owlery

2nd February 2007:
I love it! Hurry up with the next chapter pretty please!

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Review #25, by Laugharama_llama Home...

25th January 2007:
I like the idea of the story and I think the title and the summary are awesome! However, I think your story needs more of a flow. Try working on your punctuation. Without it, I feel like I'm rushing thru the story. Also, try putting in little specific details. For example, when they all walked into the Great Hall, you could have described how they were all in awe of its beauty and splendor. You could have said how even tho this was their seventh year the Great Hall never ceased to amaze them. Now that was just random, but do you get my point? I like it tho, I really do! 7/10

P.S.: I love Jesus with all my heart and all my soul as well.

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you liked it! And I LOVE how you told me that you love Jesus too! *that makes me smile! :)* Thanks for the rating too! And Thank you for your suggestions!!

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