wow great start. keep it up!Author's Response: thank you!
I really need to update more Report Review
I love this story! It is so well written. Please update soon!Author's Response: AH, I will, I hardly get on any more. DOnt worry, I'll update soon Report Review
Yay, Oliver is so cute!:)
Cant wait till the next chapter! Report Review
Nice job on the first chapter!!:)
Cant wait to read the next one! Report Review
I like your story so far, but, uh, any particular reason her name changed to Lili in the middle of the chapter? :P Anyway, my only other bit of constructive criticism would be to make the chapters longer. Good, though, and I look forward to the next chapter. :DAuthor's Response: haha whoops typo Report Review
like the story so far...can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: I just sent inthe next chapter, but it hasnt been validated yet. So be expecting greatness! Report Review
I think you're a very good writer, your story is very well written. I like it. :)Author's Response: well thank you very much!! I really need to update more aaaaaaaaaaaugh!! Report Review
AAAHHHH!! It sounds great I'm gonna keep trying to read it k Kara kara?Author's Response: okey dokey!! "You like me! You really like me!" So...wjat u think so far missssy? Report Review
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