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Reading Reviews for The Beginning of The End
  
15 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Blacklock It's late, I'm lost..and you are not who I want to see.

13th August 2015:
OoOoOoOo Getting warmer!

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Review #2, by Blacklock What is in the past, only reminds us of what is to come....

13th August 2015:
:-) im liking where this is going

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry I'm delaying I work 3 jobs and am a mommy!

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Review #3, by Kody What is in the past, only reminds us of what is to come....

7th July 2015:
I think this has some definite potential to be great! Even though I am a die hard slytherin fan and like when the stories are told as if Harry were sorted differently. I would like to see it take a dark turn

Author's Response: Yes, I usually am a Dramione fan - and almost made the story like that. I wanted however, to incoperate a twin to be evil instead of Harry - so that is where this story came into play.

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Review #4, by Sakuraangel1327 Blonde, evil, and oh so touchy...

24th April 2009:
must.have.more.information.

Author's Response: will be fixing this story! 8 years later and I'm back.

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Review #5, by Sakuraangel1327 Meetings,vomit,and a little Sorting....

24th April 2009:
When its in someones POV, its 'I' and 'My', not "you", or "your". sorry, but it does get annoying sometimes to see 'you' and 'your'. no disrespect. Just constructive critisim.

Author's Response: thank you, I was young and not a very good writer. I will be fixing this story soon. I fixed my other story, and am just waiting for validation!

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Review #6, by SomethingWitty17 Blonde, evil, and oh so touchy...

22nd August 2007:
You simply must keep writing! Me thinks it's awesome!

Author's Response: I dont have time right now.

But I will one day.


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Review #7, by manic_rage Blonde, evil, and oh so touchy...

30th December 2006:
haha. her angry at snape. brilliant. ass grabbing. haha.

Author's Response: :) Hope you liked it!!

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Review #8, by manic_rage Meetings,vomit,and a little Sorting....

30th December 2006:
i don't think Slytherin is spelled with an 'e', but i could be mistaken. Anyways love it so far. update four soon.

Author's Response: You might be right...

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Review #9, by Warlock Blonde, evil, and oh so touchy...

31st October 2006:
Very very impressive!!!!! I can hardly wait to read more!!!!

Author's Response: thanks :)

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Review #10, by SunSation Gal 07 Blonde, evil, and oh so touchy...

25th September 2006:
Stupid Malfoy. Stupid Snape. No he does not have a clue what she is capable of. No one does. Look frward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you! You should get more people to read!!!

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Review #11, by SunSation Gal 07 Meetings,vomit,and a little Sorting....

14th September 2006:
You have me hooked. As soon as I started I could tell it was going to be good. Look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Chpt. 3 In process of writing, keep watch!

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Review #12, by SlytherinSweetheart6 What is in the past, only reminds us of what is to come....

13th September 2006:
AH! That's not good! Great story! I never would have thought to make one about harry having a sister or brother for that matter, i like it!

Author's Response: Thank you! You should get more people to read it ^_~

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Review #13, by smile2006 Meetings,vomit,and a little Sorting....

13th September 2006:
WOW! pRETTY GOOD! iF YOU WANT I CAN MAKE YOU A BANNER, JUST GO TO MY AUTHOR PAGE AND CLICK ON MY WEBSITE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!

Author's Response: I will do that.

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Review #14, by Hermione33 What is in the past, only reminds us of what is to come....

6th September 2006:
It's pretty awesome. Can I make you a banner please? Just go visit my author's page, and you'll be faced with a couple of options.

Author's Response: I wrote you, also chapter two put in for validation!!

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Review #15, by DarkNovember88 What is in the past, only reminds us of what is to come....

6th September 2006:
why would she hurt him!!! ahh cant wait to see where this goes

Author's Response: You shall see, as soon as I get this darn goverment paper done, its back to more chapters.

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