wow. thats so sweet. it made me teary.Author's Response: Really? YEAH! I mean, I'm sorry. Report Review
That was so sad and heartbreaking. Poor Neville's story is so saddening, and his innocence in this fic just makes me feel worse about it (but in a good way, it means you have a great story here). Just like Neville, I wish "bad things" wouldn't happen to people! :'(Author's Response: Aww, Poor NEVVVVY! Me too. Report Review
oh, that was very sad. sooo sad. i never realy thought about how neville would react to his parents "illness".
it was very well writen and, well, sad. but realistic. except for the car, i don't think they woould use a carAuthor's Response: Oh yeah... no cars... whoops =] Report Review
Fabulous! Total tear-jerker. Great writing.Author's Response: Thanks so much Report Review
That was so sad, but i really loved it! I think the young Neville was perfect! You captured emotions meaningfully yet simply. Neville is my favorite character, but I can never find any good stories about him that don't end up with a weird pairing. Thank you for this story! It was a highlight of my day!Author's Response: Same here. Well, Neville ranks number 2, right besides Ron. Anyways, that's why I wrote this about him! Report Review
It was very good, but so sad! It almost made me cry! Great story!Author's Response: It did? Yeah! I mean, I'm sorry! Right? Report Review
Aww! Sorry, couldn't help myself. Anyways, I love the characterization. The innocence, the inquisitiveness, the incomprehension...anyways, yeah. I wish there was a bit more depth as Neville tries to understand what happened. I really liked the closing lines (from "Throw that away, Neville..."). A nice piece. Thanks for bringing it to my attention!Author's Response: I aww at lots of stuff. I sometimes feel it's nessacary. Report Review
This was really sweet- but sad. It seemed a little off-canon to me, but that's okay. Nothing wrong with stretching a few things for a good story. You did an excellent job of portraying a young boy, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.Author's Response: Thanks a ton! Report Review
Oh that was brilliant. Sad, and brilliant. Totally going on my faves.Author's Response: REALLY? TRULY? Yeah, I'm sp happy. I love going to favs. Haha, it makes me feel so happy. I could sing and dance right now. Report Review
Oh, it was really good! Itt almost made me cry. I ♥ how it's written exactly like a child would write it and how its so realistic. Author's Response: I'm glad you saw that. It took me a while just to write simple and child-like. It was hard! Thanks so much! Report Review
Oh wow- that was very good. You captured how the mind of a little kid would work- great job! Very bittwersweet. 8/10.Author's Response: Thanks a ton! Report Review
aww..I liked it. Poor NevilleAuthor's Response: I love Neville...=[ Report Review
Thats so sad... i imagine that's how Neville acted when he founf out about his parents. And Neville was very smart when he was little, even tough he thought he wasn't. 10/10!!!Author's Response: Yeah. I wouldn't be able to cope if my parents were like Neville's! Thanks so much for your review. Report Review
Interesting! Are you planning to continue this at all? I think it'd be interesting to see how Neville grew up from his POV...Author's Response: Er- no.. I don't think so. I have a pile of stories waiting to be typed and posted. Maybe after a while =)
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Aww, this is such a sweet, yet sad story! Neville is SO adorable. 10/10!Author's Response: Hmmm yes, he is. Neville is my all time favorite character, but sometimes, he can be hard to write. Thanks for your review! Report Review
Awwww, poor dear.
Neville needs more fics written about him. I really do love him as a character...
Anyway, you captured him well, and I almost cried with your last line.
This was written beautifully, and I could really see Neville thinking like this.
Really, amazing, fab job.
*blu..Author's Response: Oh really? I always feel really good when someone is going to cry. Its hard to do and I'm glad I "almost" made you cry! Haha In a good way, of course! Report Review
Oh...that's so sad, but very good. 10/10! Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
Sweet... feel bad for poor neville. Author's Response: I know. Poor innocent Neville.
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Woah, really dramatic. I feel horrible for Neville I mean it seems at first he was quite confident in himself, which is usually not him. I really loved the ending why he kept the wrapper. It was a wonderful sweet one-shot.Author's Response: Thanks a billion. I love Neville and I also feel horible for him. Yes, Harry's parents are dead, but Neville's are alive, yet can't do anything. I would rather not see my parents in the state his parents are. Report Review
My heart is breaking...
That was a wonderful story!! Great Job!Author's Response: Thank you sooo soo much! Report Review
aw, thats sad....man, neville is so radical yet hes got such a sad life...but this ones sorta happy-sadish, you know what i mean? i like it.....Author's Response: Yeah I know what you mean. I tried to make it sad, yet happy. Er. I'll stop now. Report Review
This story is sooo good. Oh my gosh..I felt so bad for Neville. I love Neville. Poor baby. I loved this. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love Neville too. Ahh he's so adorable! Report Review
*sobs uncontrolably over keyboard then gets grip on self* that was very good. neville's character was well writen and it was very emotional hence the sobbingAuthor's Response: Oh really? Thanks so much! I didn't relieze it was such a tear jerker! Report Review
oh that is sooo sad poor neville *cries*
lisaxxxxxxxxAuthor's Response: It's going to be alright! Well, maybe not. I mean... his parents never get better, but let's concentrate on happy thought, aye? Report Review
Awwwwwww ♥ i adored it. it sad but cute at the same time, i thought an awwwwwww was in order.
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