When do we get to see more? It's intersting... Report Review
Please continue to write this. I really enjoyed reading it and you have an excellent writing technique. :D Report Review
Very good! I love this 1st chappie! And the banner is amazing! :) Can't wait for the next chappie! :) Keep up the good work!
Merry Christmas! Report Review
"but something defiantly wasn’t right about him."-- check your spelling on this one, I myself do not know how to spell the word but I'm sure the way you have it here is wrong, lol.
That said... I ADORE this story, and it's only the first chapter. I love it, love it, love it! You're doing a fantastic job with Severus' characterisation (sp?)!! Please update soon! Report Review
Oh how I love a good Sev/Lily story! I just have some things I would like to inform you about.
1)The way you make it sound like Reggie is in the same year as Sev
2)Bella is eight or so years older than the maruders
3)Petter didn't start being all evil until after they left school
I think thats all! Oi! I also love this story! I hope that you post sooon! Report Review
excellent...i want more!!! Report Review
Great story. This is going on my favourites. Update soon! Report Review
Hello Serena, I loved the name of the story and the banner, it looks a little sad...
I'd like to see where this story goes, but are they going to be together in the end? Report Review
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