{reviewid: 2755829, reviewer: 'Rosie'}
2nd December 2012:
OMG! I loved this story! I can't wait to keep reading!
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{reviewid: 2723165, reviewer: 'PhoenixFlame8629'}
21st July 2012:
This is fantastic. I love your interpretation of Dumbledore and Grindlewald's duel, and the way you showed those stories as memories flashing before the character's eyes as a Killing Curse comes closer with each passing second.
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{reviewid: 2587695, reviewer: 'soniccyanide'}
10th September 2011:
Nice! Finally, a story that has nothing to do with Pairings. This was definitely creative and interesting! I'd like to imagine this is what happened back then during Riddle's school years. :)
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{reviewid: 2549187, reviewer: 'noname'}
18th July 2011:
This is awesome. Amazing. But, if Draco Malfoy is missing, how did he bring Scorpius to Hogwarts? Or maybe this was written before the seventh. I'll have to read on!
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{reviewid: 2528913, reviewer: 'Sam217%3A%29'}
1st June 2011:
That was really great! The ending was written really well, and I loved the comparison between Madam Pince and the old book, that was really creative! Great writing!
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{reviewid: 2528905, reviewer: 'AnimagusPhoenix'}
1st June 2011:
That was a really cool and creative idea but was this written b4 HP&DH? Cuz according to JKR she was he daughter of ravenclaw! And her story is tied to the Bloody Baron. He was her lover and killer.
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{reviewid: 2528815, reviewer: 'AnimagusPhoenix'}
1st June 2011:
That was really good and creative, but in HP&DH it explains that the baron was "courting" the grey lady. Then, the grey lady's mother, the original rowana ravenclaw was mad at her. So she ordered the baron to take her back home. She was stubborn and said no so in an act of desperate measures he killed her. After realizing what he did, he stabbed his self because he loved her. And that's why he wore chains, even in his ghostlihood.
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{reviewid: 2526713, reviewer: 'Sam217%3A%29'}
27th May 2011:
Really funny! Great job writing this!
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{reviewid: 2484168, reviewer: 'ekroman'}
22nd February 2011:
This is so good :) I like the the last part with Dumbledores portrait hanging on the wall!
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{reviewid: 2480376, reviewer: 'ekroman'}
14th February 2011:
Aww
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{reviewid: 2479726, reviewer: 'ekroman'}
13th February 2011:
I really like this but note that if he started september '82 May '83 would still be first year and November '83 would be the start of second year not third :)
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{reviewid: 2401959, reviewer: 'Jazzeh%20Turnip'}
22nd August 2010:
You wrote the young Voldemort perfectly. Tom Riddle had that charm about him, but was still a bit of a man piece on the inside. This is spot on to what I think the teenaged Tom would've been like.
You really captured both his cruel, heartlessness, but you made him more human than the Voldy we know.
As soon as Myrtle was mentioned I was just WAITING for it to happen. I love the idea that he'd planned it all, almost as if he was using her as his first killing... a practice. And the mention of the diary too -shudder-
10/10
Lorren
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{reviewid: 2396747, reviewer: 'Marauder_at_heart1996'}
16th August 2010:
Lovely, intriguing first chapter. Look forward to reading the rest! :)
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{reviewid: 2359906, reviewer: 'maskedmuggle'}
11th June 2010:
Lovely chapter!
Well written,
and the poem at the end is brilliant!
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{reviewid: 2242259, reviewer: 'ddddddddd'}
23rd October 2009:
salazar slytherin right coolio
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{reviewid: 2107216, reviewer: 'maandavi'}
28th April 2009:
it is fantastic i . i have not read any fanfic as good as this .i want to read the next chapter
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{reviewid: 1972230, reviewer: 'Potterholic'}
25th October 2008:
That was so sad! I love the description, and the flashback was done brilliantly too. The last paragraph was my favourite part, because it’s almost like he knew what Cho would go through after his death. Loved it!
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{reviewid: 1939279, reviewer: '...'}
1st June 2008:
This was so touching. Very sad, unbearably so. It's something that could make a person cry. Beautifully written.
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{reviewid: 1938543, reviewer: '....'}
31st May 2008:
"..had successfully seen through almost three centuries of students."
Wouldn't it be three decades?
Love the story though...
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{reviewid: 1931539, reviewer: 'george4eva'}
23rd May 2008:
I really like this story so far. I have always wanted to know the stories of the 4 founders...so this story will be quite interesting!
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{reviewid: 1901568, reviewer: 'tinytonks11'}
21st April 2008:
thats not the actual way he died >
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{reviewid: 1895667, reviewer: 'baletgir'}
14th April 2008:
A really intriguing start. I don't understand why I would want to read something that contains a lot of information I assume I already know, but it seems very interesting and I am sure you have add many new things to the stories of these wonderful people of Hogwarts! Your writing is very very good. I hope to find the time to read the rest of this sometime soon!
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{reviewid: 1865085, reviewer: 'Jamoki'}
15th March 2008:
That was a great chapter. i will read more when i have time. good job.
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{reviewid: 1862288, reviewer: 'cjoey97'}
13th March 2008:
This story is really good, very complex yet effective.
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{reviewid: 1839812, reviewer: 'Potterholic'}
22nd February 2008:
Great chapter! I love how you wrote her character and her life story. Good work!
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