This is great. Me love long time this story. WRITE MORE, dammit!!! I will suffer withdrawal symptoms within the first 2 mins!! Report Review
Madam, thou art very evil :P :P
I love, love your fic and I am absolutely starved!! Good job and waiting for the next update
I love Camilla as well Report Review
great chapter loved the daydreaming in charms.
this had me cracking up for ages- "Old Filius has apparently not lost his charm" priceless
and didnt want to say before cause thought was just being Jane Austen obsessive but after the mention of p+p- is brandon by any chance named after conel brandon for sense and senseability?
again great chapter, loved the daydreams and want to kidnap brandon so he can give me lots of hugs (he reminds me of the kind of guy who would be a good hugger.) Report Review
hehe loved 5 year old percy-priceless!
and ha in your face mary he was talking about Jill's hair- HA!
hehe sorry, great chapter! Report Review
the craziness was excellant- i love the hufflepuffs!! not that i'd actually want to be one but you can imagine them sacrificing someone to some giant badger god. any how- again great chapter! loving jill's daydreams, they're really well written and fit nicely into to the whole story Report Review
lol priceless chapter - loved the insults 'chicken horse' my favourite by far!
i absolutely adore Jill! Report Review
i love Jill- shes not mean shes just not one of those bloody airhead fools!! and i love the whole taking the piss out of oliver- some people just dont understand sarcasm and its their loss!!!
rite off to read next chapter Report Review
Love your story-still laughing about her day dreams. a cup filled with slytherins...hehe
and i've lost count how many times i've done the whole are u thinking about mr x as mr x walks by to my friends and my friends to me!!!
really well written! Report Review
Gimme more!!! Brilliant fic, you're a funny thing you are! Report Review
Heehee, she's funny. I do that too, zooming out when i'm with my friends and making up stories in my head and laugh out loud and get puzzled looks from strangers on bus stops. Report Review
omg this is really good Report Review
Plz update quickly! And check out my fics! Report Review
yay, love your writing, and this story.
SaveGinny Report Review
You make me pee my pants!
.that's a compliment Report Review
the story is really funny and wonderful. you have done a good job.please update it faster. Report Review
OHMYY. YAY@THEDEMENTORS. (: I loved that scene in the book. ;) Report Review
I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON Report Review
Seriously, John is a jerk. And that lovely bit of description was just gross.
Amazing chapter, by the way!
~Jess Report Review
hmmm...okay.please update soon!! Report Review
I think I'm actually in love with this story. It's amazing!!
I love the way you've made it go along with the events in POA. And just shown it from another point of view, and only occassionally bringing Harry Potter into it. It's brilliant. Update soon.
Author's Response: Reviews like that make me feel so bad about not writing. Oh God, I'm sorry! :( Report Review
I've just read through my old rewievs and, as you so kindly told me, I found mistakes... Indeed... Oh well, done is done!
Peace! (Dude...) Author's Response: You're better now (not that you weren't before or anything).
Peace out! Report Review
Mary and Sue, or Mary Sue, made me want to vomit. Ugh, shudder.
I couldn't stay away, I kept reading, but now I'm really going to sleep. -and hopefully dream of Oliver with his perfect, eyelash riddled eyes, beautiful pillow lips, cute little nose, good hair, strong, muscular body...okay, perhaps I should stop now. Sorry, but it's your fault! lol!
Oh, my last comment was your 100th by the way, yeah me! I am so jealous, but you deserve it:)Author's Response: 100! Oh God, I never thought I'd get there. Yay for me! :D Report Review
My eyes are closing down, but I want to prop them open with toothpicks so I can go on reading your story, it's so funny! Your girl reminds me so much of me, just the way she's naturally a little crazy and sees nothing wrong with that at all, becuse you just can't help it. Also the whole daydreaming thing, all the time about weird and funny things, but a lot of the times, guys. I will comtinue tomorrow!Author's Response: I think a lot of people can relate to Jill, actually. Let's face it; there are a lot of crazy girls out there who like to daydream. Thanks, Redrose!
You go girl! This is the funniest chapter so far Dude!! (I can't believe I just called you dude...)
Author's Response: Are you kidding? :O The funniest chapter? Wow, I didn't expect that. And I really didn't expect you to call me dude. Makes me think of Finding Nemo, though. Report Review
yay :DAuthor's Response: :) Report Review
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