5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Lady Serendipity The 10th of December

1st December 2006:
“Why dose the 10th of December always make me so miserable?”


You spelt 'dose' wrong. Ummm I am sorry to say but this story is a little unbelievable with the Lily losing her viriginity to Sirius in one night? Lily was smart and she wasnt going to give it up that easily. Also I dont think she would've drank that much either? Over some friends? Mmm you can write ok its just the plot seens a little odd.

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Review #2, by Jaggy Need Not Tell Twice

10th November 2006:
very nice. i'm eager to read more, yet again! :)

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Review #3, by ?? Need Not Tell Twice

6th November 2006:
my birthday is the tenth of december, omg!

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Review #4, by imperfectionist Need Not Tell Twice

6th November 2006:
interesting plot line...

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Review #5, by Jaggy (too lazy to log in...) The 10th of December

18th October 2006:
I'm digging this story so far. ;) Very good start. I look forward to reading more.

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