aw I wish Harry had a little sibling Report Review
ohhh..she's pregnant oh my gosh!!That was brilliant!!i loved it all,except your ending i dont think it was final enough,bit weak.But that did'nt damper my love of it,keep up your writting you have a unique touch to it!!=)Author's Response: Thank you!! now that summer's here again i think i'll start writing fanfiction again--i have time! YAY! Report Review
i like that story, i think it was the one that you let me read like a month ago. -laura Report Review
The only problem I had with it was that you used the term "emerald eyes", which I find very common and cliche ... I think that just green, or bright green, or even brilliant green, sounds a LOT better.
But the story was beautifully tragic. Keep up the beautifully tragic work.Author's Response: Yeah, it is overused. I wish there were more ways to put it. Thanks! Report Review
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