Reading Reviews for The Night They Died...
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Review #1, by weaselredhair The night it all Happened :(

26th October 2011:
aw I wish Harry had a little sibling

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Review #2, by Voodoo child The night it all Happened :(

4th December 2006:
ohhh..she's pregnant oh my gosh!!That was brilliant!!i loved it all,except your ending i dont think it was final enough,bit weak.But that did'nt damper my love of it,keep up your writting you have a unique touch to it!!=)

Author's Response: Thank you!! now that summer's here again i think i'll start writing fanfiction again--i have time! YAY!

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Review #3, by ginnypottergurl793 The night it all Happened :(

23rd October 2006:
i like that story, i think it was the one that you let me read like a month ago. -laura

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Review #4, by Bubblechimes The night it all Happened :(

10th October 2006:
The only problem I had with it was that you used the term "emerald eyes", which I find very common and cliche ... I think that just green, or bright green, or even brilliant green, sounds a LOT better.

But the story was beautifully tragic. Keep up the beautifully tragic work.

Author's Response: Yeah, it is overused. I wish there were more ways to put it. Thanks!

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