wow it's good but why 15+Author's Response: I rated it 15+ for future chapters, I might be changing that though becuase I had a change in the plot... Report Review
Good so far, keep updating!Author's Response: Thanks! I plan to update, but I'm focusing on Adventures in Parenting right now and working on a Christmas fic (a short story and a one shot song fit thing...) so this story is kind of on the "back burner" so to speak. But I hope to update at least once before Christmas. Report Review
wow. that was really good. i loved the incorporation of the song. please write more soon! Report Review
It is so sad... I almost cried... Reminded me of my dad's death...
Anyway, it was a great story, and really well-written. I will be looking for future updates.
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love it, really sad (makes me wanna cry), but i still love it. update soon! Report Review
awww poor James! please update as soon as possible Report Review
That was sad :( but really well written! I love stories when one of Harry's parents survives and i hope you continue :)
“I will raise Harry to be everything we ever dreamed he would be! I will keep living my life so that Harry will have a life,” - loved that line - it almost made me cry. Can't wait for more :D Report Review
Screw what other people write, that waz a very interesting start of the story...harry being raised by his dad...hmm...please keep going, i cant find any stories where either of his parents survived, if u know of ne arthours like u please email me there screen name. my email adress is email@example.com thank u,keep writing- StoneyAuthor's Response: thank you so much for the postive review! I'm not sure of anyone else that has a story where one of Harry's parents survive, but if I find any I'll let you know! Report Review
Author's Response: can you please tell me why my story was bad so I can fix the problem? Report Review
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