omg. i love the marauders. u make fictional characters HOTTT lol, but im serious. i love the fic... maybe more description but u never know. sometimes fics call for description, sometimes they dont. urs is good how it is. REALLY GOOD so keep it up. its ur first fic... rite??? well its amazing. not meaning to pump ur ego, i swear. im notorious for leaving long reviews so ill end here. u rock Report Review
i liked it but u know i thinkit needs more description, however i love ur idea Report Review
Omg omg omg omg 1: me love padfoot 2: mine 3: great start to the story Report Review
loved it...but lily sounds like an adult at 11 lol update soon!!! ~*TRINA*~ Report Review
Acio next chapter! PLEASE?Author's Response: I'll try...but thanx! You rock.!!! =)) Report Review
good start update!Author's Response: Thanks!!! My first fanfic Report Review
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