Absolutely love this story! Totally amazing. Love the whole plot. You've portrayed the characters so well. Except maybe Cho, I never really thought of her as bitchy but I suppose she had to be for the story. Would love to read more of this! Don't leave me hanging!

You're a great writer.

~Vicky

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I loved it!! Please continue!

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You should really finish the story? I want to know what happens next

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Update!! I love this story!!

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Please write more than two more chapters or do a sequel. Your writing has gotten so much better since the first chapter. I've had fun readying what you have so far
- happy writing

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i love it! upsate as soon as you can!? i love it!

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UGH ginny is being so so STUPID it's annoying the hell out of me! wtf why is she just. giving up on harry? hermione is being the only sane one here, and also, I HATE CHO. she is sooo... icky. ew. harry/cho = No.
she should have told harry, she should have put harry's name on eloise's birth certificate, and she can't just pretend her relationship with harry never happened, because it did and she is being a b*tch!!!
oh, and btw, the story's amazing! two thumbs up!

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great story plz plz plz update soon!

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Gah Cho is one of the most annoying characters ever but i absolutely love the story! Oh and if you could throw her off a building in a future chapter I'd be super happy!

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Hi its me! Do you think that you can update it? i really want to knows what happend next.
Jackie..

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omg!!!i cant believe she did that ohhh so much is going through my head!!!poor ginny!!!

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oh god i cant believe that happened im glad no ones around to see my tear filled eyes oh i want to cry out loud but ill be strong for ginny!!!

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Lol this chapter made me cry!

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Hey are you going to finish this story or just leave us all hanging? Its a brilliant story, but last time you updated was at Christmas. Its been quite a while since then. Anyway, like I said, great story. Keep up the good work

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I dearly love this story and so want to see the entire Chang family strung up by their toes and force fed Ex-Lax. I hope we'll see the next chapter soon. ^_^

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at first i thought ginny was about to totally break it off, but thankfully it was a whole lot better. as for another baby, i'm not sure eloise will be to happy about that. i had a terrible nightmare last night in which my mother told me she was pregnant again after 14 years. not pretty. so i'll be interested to see eloise's reaction to her parents latest plans.

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i love eloise to death! she is the perfect daughter for harry and ginny. my favorite line in this chapter was probably "only you and harry could produce the world's biggest smartass". eloise had about a dozen other great one-liners in this chapter. i just absolutely love her character.

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i litterally had tears in my eyes when i read eloise's letter to harry. and i NEVER cry. but that was just so sweet and beautiful. all ginny's conversations with molly were pretty hilarious. i loved the line "It was almost like they were teenagers again, waiting for Molly to leave the kitchen so they could snog each other senseless." that was simply hilarious, especially because the song i was listening to was screaming "teenagers, teenagers" at the exact moment i read it.

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YAY!!! harry and ginny have finally admitted to eachother the obvious, that they are completely in love with eachother.
oh, and i'd just like to add just how much i've enjoyed this fic. it is absolutely fabulous and totally original. it's now four in the morning and i've probably been reading this for over four hours. it is totally addicting.

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wow once i am no longer mad at harry, ginny has to go and piss me off. obviously ginny still loves harry, everyone knows that!! why won't she let him come back into her life. and why has the letter cho burned not been discussed yet?

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good, that is the way it should be. harry is finally acting like he has a head on his shoulders.
i really do love eloise. she is so much like both ginny and harry, but still so uniquely herself. you have her perfect.

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that was the sweetest thing in the world when harry said that his family had finally returned. although i still don't understand he could go nearly sixteen years without seeing his two best friends in the world. he just needs to end it with cho, and fast. i thought ginny seemed a little out of character when she lashed out at cho. not the fact that she lashed out, that's totally ginny, but the way she did it. i mean she has six older brothers. i was expecting ginny to give cho a solid punch right in the kisser, not some sissy hairpulling. i also loved the whole cereal thing. you could tell their how much he still thinks about the lif he left behind.

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so excited eloise is finally meeting harry and hopefully everything is about to start to fall back into place. afterall, harry had just decided he could no longer live without ginny as well as the fact that he couldn't live with cho.

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poor harry, he just can't forget ginny. of course i do have little sympathy for him due to the fact that he never went after her.

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I am now thoroughly pissed off with harry. if he really does love ginny as much as he says he does, why doesn't he go after her?? the idiot!!! i also think it's a little strange that harry hardly ever talks to his best friends anymore. another thing, i can't picture him playing professional quidditch for a living. he'd want to be out in the "real" world actually doing something good for people.
i did however love how ginny used hermione for eloise's middle name.

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