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Review #1, by MileyMalfoy Behind These Hazel Eyes

9th July 2014:
It's great to get to see the events that unfolded from Cho's POV. I love the fact that you started the story off with her memories and described what the summer and return to Hogwarts was like for her. So often we get wrapped up in what's going on in Harry's head, especially in OoTP, that we forget that there are other people going through the same thing and dealing with a lot of the same situations as he is. At least in the fact that Cedric died and had people who were far closer to him than Harry was, even if by seeing him die Harry is clearly allowed to be traumatized. This story seems to play right into the quote from Hermione about all the things on Cho's mind, and I really appreciate the fact that the story shows this all in such a readable manner.

Great job!
~ Meg
House Cup 2014 Review & Educational Decree #5

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Review #2, by nott theodore Behind These Hazel Eyes

9th July 2014:
Hello there! I'm here reviewing stories in the house cup which refer to the upsetting events of last year!

I really liked the way that you wrote about Cho Chang here. It's a very original and unusual characterisation and portrayal of her as a character and I think that you wrote about her grief very well, and you explored the subject quite sensitively. I think that it's only natural that Cho would be so affected by Cedric's death and that she would dwell on the events of last year, including the fact of why he signed up and then the futility of his death. I liked the fact that you used some of Cho's friends to help her get through the overwhelming grief that she was feeling in this story and that she still had people there who would help her. Amy seemed really nice and a good friend. I'm glad that the story started so sad but that by the end it had become much more hopeful and a bit happier. And the last few lines were just perfect!

Sian :)
Gryffindor House Cup 2014 Review Educational Decree #5

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Review #3, by Litluver12 Behind These Hazel Eyes

26th July 2009:
Is this your first story? Because I found it on 'random story' and I love the angle. I would have never thought to do Cho! Keep on writing! -Litluver12 ;)

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Review #4, by juliadiggory92 Behind These Hazel Eyes

26th August 2006:
Very well written. I really liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!


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