This is a cool story.
Very interesting.

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i really really really luv this story very well written i think i really luv it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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I think that this chapter was written a little quickly there seemed to be much that was left out.

Author's Response: It was I kind of wanted to get to the next part quickly then I wanted to do the next because the second half is going to be so much more exciting!

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I really liked this chapter

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Very interesting, good read.

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I can't wait to read this!! I'll do it if I can spare the time! Good luck with this story!!

Author's Response: Hello Helena
Glad to have at least one review. I think you'll probably like it.

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this is a very mysterious story..i like it!! please write more!!

Author's Response: sure. thank you. i'm working on it.

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Love it!! PAMS!!
btw, is that a pic of Edison Chen> ;P

Author's Response: yes, it is. i loved him in The Vampire(Twins) Effect and had to choose him as my model

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WOW! All I can say is WOW! Does wow work as an answer?

Author's Response: Sure

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odd... cool though, can't wait to read more, you have some really good stories up

keep writing
Kouken

Author's Response: Thanks I will and I sent in the second chappie they just wanted me to resize the banner.

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Intriguing. You don't happen to have watched Twins Effect, do you? XD Lol... anyway, I like. Like I said, intriguing. I'd like to know how it turns out... but I guess that's a long way yet. I'm Swift (well, real name's Lisa), btw.... was reading a D/Hr of yours, which was also good. Well, keep writing, you're good at it!

Author's Response: Yes, I love that movie and is why I picked him for the banner. I intended a European vampire but couldn't find one without their face contorted. Thanks and I am halfway done but not finished posting.

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