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Review #1, by ballet_dancer Blossoming Fever

7th July 2007:
Whoah... That's definitely interesting. I see you haven't updated this in a while, but I certainly hope you do, because I'm really curious as to what is going to happen. You write Luna very well, she seems almost exactly the way she is in the books. And Victor Krum is also very funny. Crumpet. That cracked me up.

Oh, Trelawney as headmistress, sheesh. Of all the people they could have chosen... I suppose she was the only one who couldn't fight... Well, I do hope you update, and I can't wait to find out what happens.

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Review #2, by HogwartsMafia Blossoming Fever

7th November 2006:
Rushed in the bottome with your quotations marks. Though alot better, I can actually feel the flow of it. I finally finished reading it.

”Wha?” He began to ask before the blank pages began to leak black ink onto it’s self. Neville made a face as he read the text, “ ‘You could have asked me anything and you greet me, simple minded human. How Polite. I like you, more then the rude blonde.’ ”

“ I am not rude, I’m honest.”

“ ‘Honesty is a virtue, child….but you are bold…?’ This book is weird. Let me ask it something then…” He began to think as Luna shrugged, returning to her book, muttering about cursed values. “Hmm… Well here is an obvious… do you know about the illness spreading around Hogwarts?”

“That’s smart.”

“ Ahh...it’s answering…”

“Read it to me then.”

“Fine, alright…’ Tristis Aegrus. That is the Illness that haunts these walls. Provoke emotion not.’ “ Neville looked to Luna and felt as if he were looking in a mirror, sure that he shared the same expression he saw on her face. Utter confusion.

Luna took the book from Neville’s hands and looked into it, “ What?”

The pages of the book fluttered and the book began to close, slipping out of Luna’s hands. Before it’s cover’s slammed shut, a torn shred of paper flew out of it’s back. Neville and Luna watched it as it drifted like a feather to the table top, black ink dripping from it.

‘ Provoke emotion.’
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