Sad. I'm still crying. By gooly gee. Its good.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Personally I never liked this one much, but it's always good to hear that somebody else did. Thanks for the review!
much love,
Sammy Lou

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please update this story i love it it cant just end there
please?

Author's Response: I'm sorry to disappoint, but this was just a one-shot and one i'm not particualarly fond of. I'm very happy that you liked it, but i feel it's better left as it is. Thank you so very much for your kindness, i really appreciate it. Please stop by and read some of my other stories that i'm sure you'll enjoy even more than this.

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aww this was sweet, you wrote it so well. i really liked this well done

Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful reviewI!!!


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Terribly sorrowful, isn't it? I nearly teared up myself reading those letters! You do a wonderful job of creating well defined, believable images and the flow is strong and steady throughout. All together, your first chapter was beautifully written and aside from a few grammar and spelling errors, it was utterly delicous. Well done!

If you ever get the time, would you mind skimming over my own fic, Dreaming, and giving me a few pointers? I think I could learn something from you!

Let me know when you update! I'd love to see where this goes.

Sugar

Author's Response: I originally wrote this for a competition and then decided to start a different one so this one never really took off and i decided i liked it more as a one-shot. i most likely leave it just as it is, but thanks for the support. Maybe if i get some more reviews urging a continuance i will. of course i will check out your story. please don't stop here read some of my other stuff and tell me what you think.
with love
Sammy Lou

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