This is really funny and cute and I love how Sirius is so nervous. Also, you show perfectly that they know each other on a deep level with all of the observations they make about one another. The play was just hilarious at some points too, and I absolutely love the ending. I would say more but it would be rather repetitive: it's just really well written. I commend you! :) 10/10! Report Review
awww... i think this is really sweet. Report Review
I love it! Report Review
It was good! the ending was a bit abrupt... Report Review
this is an interesting idea for a story. Sweet. Report Review
cute.neet ending. needs to be embelished at places (like at the end :) ) Report Review
ooh, I LOVED it!!! Report Review
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