So sad! Loved it Report Review
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Wow that's kind of sad but cool...
Good work you are my favourite author
Please read some of my stuff, I would appreciate it but of course you don't have to :) Report Review
SO FREAKIN SAD! Yet very good... But, I love angust stories, and thats what my next one is, but I havent posted it yet. Report Review
That was so depressing! But you wrote it very well. I loved it. Report Review
really good. sad though. 9.5/10 Report Review
WHAT A DEPRESSING STORY! WHY DID SHE MARRY RON IF SHE LOVED RON, AND WHY DID RON BREAK IT OFF WITH HERMIONE IF BOTH OF THEM STILL LOVED EACH OTHER. AND... WHY COULDN'T THEY JUST APPARATE EVERYONCE AND A WHILE TO VISIT! It was nicely written, but perhaps you could write another chapter with a more resolved ending... why why why? is the question im asking! Report Review
That was lovely! Absolutely brilliant. 10/10 Report Review
i normally hate ron/hermione, but this one is great! a little depressing, but still spectacular (that's my new word=]) anyway, this is one of the best characterizations i have seen in a while. Harry was a little off, but Harry is always a little off... it's not your fault. i just needed to tell you that for once, i actually liked ron/hermione. and let me tell you, making me like it is a ginormous accomplishment. Spectacular! Report Review
OMG!! That was freaking amazing...even though I HATE Ron/Hermione, that was breathtaking. You're freaking brilliant!! Report Review
Naww, it was sad. Good... but sad.
Keep writing and such, well done. Report Review
This fic has some very beautiful phrasing and I hope you realize that you're brilliant with descriptive words. The only thing I want to caution you on is your use of commas and periods and such. Your punctuation, at times, seems to take away from the fluidity of your work. Go back and revise a little bit. Maybe offer this up to a beta in the forums just to work out the kinks.
Lovley, really. I truely enjoyed reading this. Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks so much for the constructive criticism. You're absolutely dead-on haha, I'm so ignorant sometimes -smacks head- I'll definitely consider a beta though they'll probably hate me cause I take forever to update hehe. Thank you very much for your positive comments as well, they made me very very happy :P haha. Thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
That was very well written, a lovely story of love and betrayal and also a reminder that not everything ends the way you think or hope it will. I'm afraid my fanfics are a little more indulgent in fantasy but thats just me! R&R some of mine if you can at all would be great!Author's Response: Ooh I'll definitely check the time when schoolwork enables me too. I like fantasy :) hehe so your stories and I will get along just fine. Thanks so much for taking the time out to review my story! Report Review
Beautiful. Heartwrenching. Truly a 10/10 - despite the typos. Excellent Job. xAuthor's Response: Oooh thank you soo soo much! Report Review
Lovely story. So sad though but it made me just want to push Krum out of the picture :) I love how you used the quote at the beginning and end. I was going to go into this challenge but my story didnt turn out too well. Good job!Author's Response: Hey there, oh thank you so much! heehee yeah, if only they would've worked out. Aww, that's a bummer, its ok, there's always next time :) thanks so much for the kind review! Report Review
This is beautiful, gorgeous descriptions and I hate this song, but it works so well for your story. I am suh a sucker for complications and tragedies and destroying the innocence and closeness of their friendship, paralleling it against their current situation made it so heartbreaking to read. Believeable and sad, though I still hold out hope that Hermione will listen to her heart and not what she thinsks she has to do.Author's Response: Oh goodness, I almost fainted when I saw this review hehe, I admire your writing so much, this is such a HUGE compliment, you have NO idea! -hyperventilates- hehe. Thank you soooo much for this review, it means sooo much to me! Report Review
Awesome! I'm glad she ended up with Viktor! :) Author's Response: Aww thank you so much for the review! Heehee Report Review
I'm dont know what to say, I'm speechless.
It was fab!!
Keep the good work up!!
~HLJ~Author's Response: Oh thank you SO much! This review made me so giddy & happy hehe, thanks again! Report Review
Lovely story. Made me feel sad for Ron and Hermione. It fit perfect with the challenge. Good job =)
juls~~Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, I'm so glad that you think so hehe! Thanks for the kind words Report Review
Nice job! It's very emotional and Ron's acceptance is implied rather than stated, leaving the door open for H/R shippers :) Who made your banner (or even better did you make it yourself)? Beautiful-I'm already off to read Out of the Abyss-lovely banner there too! Author's Response: Oh thank you sooo much! I loff you lol this review made me sooo happy! Yep, I made both banners myself heehee thanks so much for the sweet words! Report Review
Wow. That was good, short but to the point. I don't normally read R/H but I loved this challenge. You did a very nice jobAuthor's Response: Thank you sooo much! I'm so glad that you liked it, I was getting a little iffy about the story! hehe thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
Really, really sad and a bit confusing, but u're promising. Author's Response: *phew* I'm glad you thought it was sad, I was trying hard to make it all heartfelt and sad but didn't really know if I achieved it or not hehe, yeah I've heard that it was a tad confusing, I'll make a note of it next time, thank you sooo much for the compliment and for reviewing! Report Review
i was confused. why at the end its about hermione standing up all of a sudden? and why half way thru.. after explaining she has a cuppa tea with viktor.. does she smash a mug of rons?? im so confsued. Author's Response: She's having flashbacks and memories about what happened and when she drops Ron's mug, she's back to reality. About Hermione standing up, she's leaving because it's uncomfortable enough, Ron can't even talk to her or look at her anymore. I hope that cleared some things up. Report Review
So sad. I love it, but so sad. Another note: Ron and Hermione will end up together, all the facts say so. Just a little note.Author's Response: teehee, yes thank you! Oh I know, I like R/Hr it's just that in this story, I wanted to along with the lyrics...I didn't stick to the canon pairing hehe, glad you liked it though. Report Review
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