6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MagicisMight Life is Either a Daring Adventure or Nothing

23rd August 2007:
I think this is a very beautiful story, sad yes, but well written I loved it!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks soo much!

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Review #2, by enpointepixie Life is Either a Daring Adventure or Nothing

23rd March 2007:
That was really nicely written. I liked that you took a canon character people never seemed to wonder about and actually went through and wrote something about her. Brilliant use of gradual background info without entire flashbacks. Good job! :)

Author's Response: *grins* Thanks, so much! This was my first one-shot, so I didn't think it was that good. I've been thinking of going back through and editing...

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Review #3, by FluerDelacour8118 Life is Either a Daring Adventure or Nothing

21st December 2006:
I liked it you captured the story very well. The emotion in it is tremendous and makes the story all the more better..Whose POV was this being told through did I just miss it in the story or was it told through know one inparticular...AMAZING STORY

Author's Response: It was told through the eyes of Marlene McKinnon's husband.


Thanks!


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Review #4, by sbfam09 Life is Either a Daring Adventure or Nothing

23rd November 2006:
very sad, but good! i can tell you really know how you wanted to portray Marlene. excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks. Truthfully, I thought she was a little bit Mary Sue.

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Review #5, by zzz_sleep_is_good Life is Either a Daring Adventure or Nothing

17th November 2006:
who is Marlene McKinnon? hmm i have no idea
this is a lovely peice, u shld be proud
it shows the emotion o fthe character well
i like it!
8/10

Author's Response: Thanks! Marlene McKinnon was an Auror; she's mentioned in OotP when Moody carries around the old photo of the Order of the Phoenix.

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Review #6, by HermioneAnne Life is Either a Daring Adventure or Nothing

29th October 2006:
Aww...this was sad..*sniff* but I really liked it!
I love how you wrote it. Very realistic and I felt for marlene..

HermioneAnne
(thanks for reading Enigma. I've posted chapter 3, but its not validated yet. :))

Author's Response: Thank you! I really like Enigma. I went for a descriptive viewpoint on this one.... Anyway, thank you for the review!

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