Wow, not what I expected Report Review
I really enjoyed this. I wish it was longer to find out more about the kids meeting the "hero". This is the first one I have read of yours. I think I will have to check out the rest of your stories now. Report Review
awww! this was so sweet. im almost crying! this was a really nice tale of how dudley loved his cousin. awww! im just speechless! Report Review
Wow. That's cute I like it. Report Review
Oh my God, this was so beautiful. I have no words to describe how I feel right, after reading this one-shot. Unfortunately for me, I've never read any stories that include Dudley or is centered around him...let alone a nice-Dudley story. And thus, you can imagine my intrigue at finding such a story on HPFF. I immediately clicked on the link and here I am, feeling sorry and cheerful at the same time. Wonderful! Keep writing great stuff *gives thumbs up* *adds story to favs* Report Review
I like thAT. wHY IS hARRY THERE? Sprry. Caps Locks. Report Review
AWW! soo cute! I like this dudley so much more than jk's dudley! there needs to be more stories like this on hpff! =]
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awww, that is a sweet story, you should turn it into a novel about what dudley feels, like, he reads an exact account about Cedrics death and he realises he has to make it up. not saying you should but meh, you dont have to listen to me...lol, i liked this story, well done -claps- Report Review
Aw... how sweet!!! Not exactly the way it happened but it wa close... sort of. It was good though I liked it. It gave Dudley a new look and made him look nicer and well a better person. Yay for Dudley!!Author's Response: hip hip horrrray hip hip horaay! Report Review
Aww, this was so sweet! I loved it so much.. You wrote it very well, and.. well, it was great! :] So cute.
- Kae Report Review
Great story and very unique - I like especially the last five lines; good for Harry to know about Dudley's feelings :-)Author's Response: Yes. I always imagined Dudley was good inside. He was though, wasn't he? Report Review
Aw, cute =). I enjoyed that, to my surprise. Dudley is one of my least favorite characters so I would have assumed this would have been not as appealing to me as it was :P. But I did like it! I've always wondered what his family would have been like, had they actually known everything that Harry went through at Hogwarts.
Hm, having named his kids was maybe a bit drastic, but a nice touch nevertheless! I liked how you kept Dudley In-character for the most part, though. Him being able to shove his parents out of the house, him considering himself "starved," and his initial attitude towards Harry: he liked him there because he had a wand can could help him. Hah.
DanaAuthor's Response: Haha, maybe it was. I personally hate when people name their children after "James, Lily, Sirius, ect." But I did it anyways. *bangs self on head*
Thanks so much, though! Report Review
Wow. This is just amazing. Well done!!!
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10/10Author's Response: Thanks Report Review
WOW! that was so...i love it, but how did Harry know where he lived? and why Lily?Author's Response: He's a wizard isn't he? Ahh, it connected Dudley with Harry somehow. Report Review
Aww! That was just so touching! It's kind of hard to believe Dudley might have a kinder side to him. But this story is just too cute and sweet! *huggles* Loved it darling! 10/10.Author's Response: *huggles* back. I loved the review. Report Review
Aw, that was a cute story. I like how it was from Dudley's point of view. Good job! I enjoyed this story!
~AlexAuthor's Response: Aw, thanks! Report Review
Wow this is so sweet! Nice job!Author's Response: Ahhh, thanks =] Report Review
aw! that was adodrable. you are so creaative to think of dudley as a deep, profound being. wonderfuly writen, so sweet, perfect.Author's Response: Ahhh Dudders. Report Review
Awww, I liked it. It would have been nicer if it was longer and had more detail, but otherwise I really enjoyed it.Author's Response: cool. Report Review
Wow! really, really good!!!Author's Response: WOW! THANKS! Report Review
aw!!! so sweet!! i loved it!!! you should write another like it!!Author's Response: Maybe, in the near furture when I cannot write anything else. Report Review
What an awesome short story! This is totally going into my favorites! I wish it went on a little more! Kinda bizarre seeing Dudley idolize Harry like that, but still really interesting! Author's Response: YAHH WHO! Report Review
absolutely amazing! i love it! it would be really cool if you took this and turned it into a novel. id read and review every chapter!Author's Response: That's a good suggestion. Maybe.. Just Maybe.... Report Review
Aw that was precious! I love your stories!Author's Response: Thanks so much. You're such a loyal reader! THANK YOU! Report Review
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