u need 2 check ur spelling! Report Review
Not bad. Are you ever going to write the next chapter???? Author's Response: Sorry people it is taking so long to wright ther 3rd chapter! I was on vacation! And i was with my grandparent, so it says it all right there! Well R&R!!!!! PLZ!! Report Review
It was kind of weird, but not bad. You over use exclamation marks and it might be better if you added more description. Also, in McGonagall's (sp) letter I think you meant "informed" not "unformed". Also when you said "Miss. Wheasly" it's "Ms. Weasly". It's an good story though, really original :) Sorry if I sounded harsh, but I'm trying to help. Report Review
good story!!!! but its spelt george....just so u know ;) keep up the good work and update soon please =) tootles ciao -sarah =) Report Review
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