Reading Reviews for Harry And The Fight For Peace
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by jfksagj The Dream And The Talk

14th December 2006:
u need 2 check ur spelling!

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Review #2, by just another potter fan The Wedding

18th September 2006:
Not bad. Are you ever going to write the next chapter????

Author's Response: Sorry people it is taking so long to wright ther 3rd chapter! I was on vacation! And i was with my grandparent, so it says it all right there! Well R&R!!!!! PLZ!!

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Review #3, by meridith The Dream And The Talk

16th August 2006:
It was kind of weird, but not bad. You over use exclamation marks and it might be better if you added more description. Also, in McGonagall's (sp) letter I think you meant "informed" not "unformed". Also when you said "Miss. Wheasly" it's "Ms. Weasly". It's an good story though, really original :) Sorry if I sounded harsh, but I'm trying to help.

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Review #4, by aquarius_girl2010 The Dream And The Talk

16th August 2006:
good story!!!! but its spelt george....just so u know ;)
keep up the good work and update soon please =)
ciao -sarah =)

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