That was great! You should write a full length story shipping Katie and Oliver! Report Review
Awww good old Katie. I loved the little flashback too! Wonderfully written! Report Review
I really liked this story. I thought it was very cute and believable. Fred and George crack me up.
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I loved it! I would love if you would write a sequel. Awesome! Keep writing. :&)Author's Response: Thank you! I had, at one point, planned on doing a sequel, but sadly, that doesn't seem to be the case anymore. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though! Report Review
So.. I just wanted to tell you how amazingly impressed I am by your writing. I saw a topic of yours in the forum and I was like wow! I love her avatar.. Then I thought I would check out your stories and saw how many you have written!! The variety in your ships is simply amazing.. o_0 I am a huge Oliver fan so I decided to read this.
I just love the simplicity of it; you have made Katie's thing for Oliver so adorable and this is quite a powerful one shot. You have everyone's characterization perfect: Fred/George, Oliver, Katie. I loved the scene with Fred and George once they got back inside. The dialogue you wrote for them was perfect!
You have a really great style of writing as well. Your descriptions are so lucid and creative, especially the scene where she first goes out into the rain. It's beautiful. This is one of those great stories that gives you a warm fuzzy feeling :) Its really adorable, I'm sending it to one of my friends to read.
Honestly, I am going to read so many more of your stories and I can't wait! I am really glad I stumbled upon your profile in the forums! I've hardly read any stories with Oliver in them, and I loved to see this.
~Hannah (Lunnah)Author's Response: Haha, awww, thank you SO much! I'm really flattered! I think the reason I've written so many ships (which, now that you point it out, is really a lot XD) is that I like coming up with just one idea of how the characters in the ship get together; so then I pretty much put my all into it, and it becomes my personal canon, of sorts. So thereafter, it's difficult for me to have them get together/interact any other way!
I'm really glad that I got the characterization right, though! I remember being especially worried about Oliver. Ahh, and I can't resist putting in the twins. :3 So anyway, again, thank you so much! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this! ♥ Report Review
this is adorable!! 100/100!!!Author's Response: Thank you! ♥ Report Review
"A slightly awkward, canon-if-you-squint, romance."
Canon-if-you-squint, I love that
The story was really good too, I can totally picture Wood acting like that.Author's Response: XD Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
loved it plz write a sequelAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I've been meaning to write a sequel for a while now, so I don't know if I'll ever get around to it. But I HAVE been planning one, so there's still a chance. Report Review
wow that was really good! you've probably heard this a billion times before, but you're an amazing author, really! this is really good!
i absolutely adore oliver fics! he's such a babe! lolz!
and jocks are hot!10/10!!!
xoxo~loloAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I really do love Oliver. ♥ Report Review
AH, once again, what a darling story! Today is the first time I've read Katie/Oliver (this story and another of yours)..and I adore it so much. Katie is such a great character and I liked Oliver more and more as the story progressed, I of course REALLY loved the last line...but I especially loved this line too:
(Oliver, however, seemed to remain oblivious of what they were hinting at, and didn’t attempt to release his hold. “Yeah, actually.” His voice was less empty now, and the twins looked impressed at this.)
Great one-shot :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very glad that you enjoyed both of my KBOW stories! Report Review
Awww so cute! this was a funny light hearted fic that i thoughally (is that how you spell it?) enjoyed. You may have noticed by now that im reviewing all of your stories in order (tho i read the riddle one first) and i would be putting them all in my favorites but then i would have 28 all by the same author, so i'm just gonna put you in my favorite author catogory and leave it at that. Your an awsum writer!Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you very much for reading and reviewing all of my stories! It really means a lot to me. ♥ Report Review
that was great, but it would have been so much better if... instead of
"She snorted. “Well, obviously.” Then she softened, her eyes warm. “Look, it’s not your fault, and it isn’t Harry’s either.” She bent down, sinking her knees into the deep puddle that had collected there. “It was those... you know, those dementor things.”"
...she had sat next to him and like put her head on his shoulder or something
also if you hadn't talked about him killing himself, sure he was upset but it made the story a bit depressing. and if katie had said something about him being a great captain and that because he was they were the best team in ages.
so i really liked the story, you are so talented. i'm jealous! keep up the good work.
catAuthor's Response: The part about Oliver killing himself wasn't really meant to be taken seriously by the reader. It was meant to be a tiny bit satirical in a way. Report Review
oh this was so cute! ! ! ! I loved it! ! ! !Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Report Review
this was absolutely breathtaking! Very well written, and smooth throughout =D This is my first oliver/katie fic, and now i think i've become a fan lol. Wonderful job!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you like Oliver/Katie now! :D Report Review
It gives you this nice *fuzzy feeling* at the end.
Great Job,Oliver and Katie are so cute together!Author's Response: They are adorable, aren't they? :D Glad you liked this! Report Review
that was such a cute story.
i really did enjoy it a lot.
loved the ending as well.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! :D Report Review
Aw, that was really cute. I always laugh when I read POA and it says Oliver was probably trying to drown himself, it's probably not very funny but I find things like broken fences hilarious so you shouldn't really trust my sense of humor. 9/10Author's Response: Thanks! I always found that part so amusing, so I couldn't help but take advantage of it. XD Report Review
awww how adorableAuthor's Response: Hee hee. ♥ Report Review
This is yet another amazing story! I love it! 10/10!Author's Response: Thank you very much! ♥ Report Review
That was really cute! I enjoyed reading about a pairing that I'd never encountered before.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it! Report Review
That was one of the weirdesy pairings I've ever read, but you made it work. I loved it.Author's Response: Really? I'm glad that you liked it, though! (Is it weird? *scratches head* I must be weird for thinking it normal! Heh.) Report Review
gah i loved it! i love oliver and kaite together! this absolutely amazing and yeah, i'll stop now but seriously, it was great! Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad that you did! I love Katie and Oliver together, too! If one could have two OTPs, then KBOW would be my second. ^^ Report Review
Anh! That is so sweet. You could even keep going with this story if you wanted and make it a short story or a novel.Author's Response: Thank you! Now I know more than ever that I really, really need to get going with that sequel... *fidgets* Report Review
Awww swet. ^^ You definitely have to write a second chapter (and more perhaps) to this one. :] Or a sequel. ^^Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ I really ought to get started on the sequel to this. I've been meaning to write one for such a long time! Report Review
Aww, that's so sweet!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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