Hey girl,I am absolutely obsessed with this story,but if she leaves, I will cry and never forgive you. Well maybe.
love,
evermore(:

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moree! i love how it is going so far. even though, when i read a couple chapters ago that she had a miscarriage, i was a little sad. but great work!

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this is really good. keep updating. I want to know what happens nest:)

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I was kind of grossed out, just a little. I feel sorry for Hermione:(

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WOW! that was intense

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I think this story is great. i know what you mean about it changing, but i think you could really take it somewhere. perhaps Hermionie meets someone else while in America? even though Draco says "he'll wait for her". haha i don't know. don't give up on it Keisha!

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OMG update soon please i begg you!

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omg really miscarage im going to cry that was so sad

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i lovee ittt you are a good writeerr

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I really like this story! I dont like pansy or her choice for an abortion scince i am agianst it but she is in cannon nice job!

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i for one did like it!

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this is like a good vs evil truce thing,,, i like it!

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wow not unexpected.. scince it is in the summery ahah but i am wondering about the draco thing

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Excellent idea and please update soon thanks.

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this is really really good please keep updating i want to find out what's gonna happen with hermione and draco

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I just read all the chapters you have written so far straight through - I really enjoyed them. You write well, the story really draws the reader in. I hope you get the chance to write more soon!

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0oo sorry i must have no read it right...


but i hate to say it but things happen for a reason soo.


lets just c what good comes out of this

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This is starting to get good. I like it. Who would have thought Malfoy and Hermione?

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NOOO!!! I wanted Hermione to have the baby. Then, maybe her and Draco would be together forever. I think they should get back together. Please update soon.

Sincerely,
sopper

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I couldn't stop crying after reading this. Keep up the great work!

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You do realize the farther along you are, if you have a miscarriage (or in other words, very early labor) then there's blood and the baby is decomposing and comes out but she [Hermione] would have to go to a hospital right away or else she could die. I am being serious...Unless your wrote that in the first place but the Staff wouldn't let you for some reason.
I find it's easier to read a story with real situations where the info is something where it makes sense and it is real. I women can't have a miscarriage then everything [physically] is fine. It's not possible.

~Slytherin_Princess44

Author's Response: I do realize that, yes. Thank you for pointing it out. However, I did research to make sure I was getting the right info, and it said nothing about how you could die if you didn't get to the hospital. Not only that, but I've had to change the story because I had something along the lines of the bloodiness of the situation, and it was rejected.
Though, I will check again. Thanks for letting me know.
-Keisha

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Nicely written and a bit stunning. Will have to go back and start from the beginning. Good use of inmagination and words.

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whats with the random paragraph after the a/n it just doesn't fit im confused... by the way good story

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0oo0 wow if i wouldnt have been paying attention i would have missed that last paragraph! well ok shes still pregnant good now cant wait to c what happens next!

Author's Response: Actually, she's not pregnant anymore. She had a miscarriage; that's what happened when she was in the woods.
Thanks for the review tho (:
-Keisha

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update soon can't wait for more chapters good work

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