It was so fun to read. A different look at the magic world. Good work keep it up!!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it.

Much love

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wow lots of action and magic. I like that it is so fast paced

Author's Response: Thanks. We try.
Keep reading and reviewing!.

Much Love

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this is a bit confusing (and i hope this doesnt sound really harsh)but i was trying to figure out who was who and i am still confused, try to explain who they are when they come into the story, so the reader isnt left hanging and boggling their head (like me) on whats going on.

Author's Response: It's not harsh. I thank you for the constructive comments.

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want a baner? See my page. All artwork is by me!

Author's Response: We just got some and are waiting for the site to allow us to put them up but we will keep you in mind for other stories.
Keep reading and reviewing,


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if ur still looking for a banner, check my site out. Jst readin ur story the now!!!
N_Tonks
Xxx

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm checking out your site now I do want a banner.

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lc is mi nikname. i think sweth is well ewvil lyk cassie riddle. bibi

Author's Response: Thanks. Keep reading and reviewing. L.Chowder and I are writing as fast as we can.

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confussing but i liked it can't wait 2 read chapter 2
6/10

Author's Response: Thanks! That whole story is up so enjoy and keep reviwing. Part 2 is WIP but we update as soon as we possibly can. What do you find confusing? Maby I can help out.

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Urgh! I want more! xD It was spectacular! ^^
MWAH
N

Author's Response: Thank you soo much! L Chowder and I are working on it. My project is done so it is all about the story!

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Nice one, seriously can't wait to read more on this

Author's Response: The next story is coming

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It was awesome, good story, i so have to reread again tonight, i just skimmed i read parts of it, good work

Author's Response: Thank you for the good review.

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Berrrrry good! I really like it! The characters and plot are really good! Keep up the good work. :D

Author's Response: Thanks I hope you continue reading!

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Nice, i'm still laughing at the panic, its was good, no spelling mistakes yay

Author's Response: Thank you. We have fun writing this and we have started the second part of the trilogy. Also Ch 10 is almost done!!Woo Hoo!

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Sweet ass chapter, can't wait to read ch9, remember to spell check

Author's Response: Yes spelling is an issue for me but oh well it could be worse.
#9 is in the process of be ing writen.

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nice chapter, had to reread it lol

Author's Response: Thanks. Ch8 is on the way and it is even juicier!

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How far are you on the next chappie?
Chappie 9, I mean.
(FYI that's gonna B my favorite!!!!!!!!!!)

Author's Response: I'm oring on 8 still.

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Good chapter, can't wait to read more, hope we can keep in touch, my email is in my profile, keep up the good work ^_^

Author's Response: I just turned in the next chapie. It is a little longer and it is very funny! I'm glad you like.

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Sweet chapter, keep it up, love to read more

Author's Response: Chapther 6 is in the prossess of validation now.

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nice chapter, can't wait to read more about it

Author's Response: Thanks I just submitted the 5th chapie. I'm getting these things up as fast as the site will allow. So it should be up with in ten days with any luck.

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BTW holy only has one L

Author's Response: ok I fixed it

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I'm working on the next chappie now. ANOTHER ONE OF MY STORIES GOT REJECTED!!!!!

Author's Response: great . But the story thing sucks

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