Reading Reviews for Summer Trip
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Review #1, by Yemi Hikari Ch. 1 - Dream Flight

20th September 2013:

Sorry to say this, but your writing is rather bland. It's devoid of emotion and I think that's the problem I had with Last kiss, which is ironic because your story Hold on has plenty of emotion, but the characters are OoC.

Because of this I don't like your OC. Mind you, I don't dislike her either. I can't really relate to her and she doesn't feel like she's a person with feelings.

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Review #2, by Taenika (a.k.a loveistrue) Ch. 1 - Dream Flight

12th January 2004:
Great! Please add more!

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