NO! Please write another chapter where they get back together. Stop reading this and start writing. NOW! Report Review
aw 10-10 Report Review
but I liked it-- it was different. Report Review
It's great! You captured the emotions that would be in a scene like this, and it was so decriptive I could see it in my head. Report Review
Nice story so far, they are a few grammer mistakes in it, but that happens to everyone. You discribe the emotions very well. While reading it i can feel the pain Hermione feels, that is a good thing.
Keep on writing the way you do.
Exxalia Report Review
How could I hate you??? I loved it!! It was so well written and you could feel the pain & angst. Def. loved it & its going on my favorites!!!! Report Review
I HATE YOU! Haha, just kidding. This was reeeeeaaaalllyyyy well written. But this die hard Hermione/Ron fan here wishes it'd had a happier ending. It just makes me so sad. Myabe I should go read some of your fluffier ones to make us both feel better! Haha. You get a 10, because I loved it even though it had a depressing ending :]:]. Report Review
awwwwwww thats sad=( but good story! i really liked it !
=)Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
aww, i wish it ended happy. But it was very good. Keep it up!!
you should write a sequel!!Author's Response: lol I might do if i have time, and of course people like this. Report Review
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