2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by dragonlove Chapter 2: The new House of Black

23rd August 2006:
Hmmm, I am sorry to see that Harry got his face punched in but what happened? What brought them together to finally cement the deal? Intrigued and ready to take on the next chapter, which will hopefully be soon! what is with the anger issues with Harry?

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Review #2, by arriannat Chapter: August 26th 1997

16th August 2006:
please write more cause this is really good oh and why did her water break in her eighth month not her ninth

Author's Response: second chapter is up for validation! and her water broke in the eighth month so she could have the baby by the time she's at school; it adds more tension. but there's that, and because she got stressed thinking about Harry...

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