I just realized how short my review from earlier is. How terrible of me! I re-read this chapter and I should have told you before how wonderful your characters voice is. She has a real presence in the words and your descriptions are just spot on! Obviously this chapter is a bit short, but it is so well done! I truely can't wait to read more. Are you posting soon? Report Review
This is a lovely start, but so very short! It's needs more meat, more imagery, more... more... just more! Report Review
I LIKE IT!
i'm adding it to my favorites!
update soon pleaz pleaz pleaz!!Author's Response: thanks :D. i'll try to update ASAP. Report Review
I love the idea of vampires at Hogwarts...I've always liked stories that included it. Good first chapter! I can't wait for the plot to really set in :DAuthor's Response: i'm so glad you like it. haha it was just something i kind of randomly thought of during history class. but yeah.
thanks! Report Review
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