yeah! an update! please keep writing! it's really good! :) Report Review
sad :( why? beautiful. magicguy93 Report Review
so sad :( but good magicguy93 Report Review
This is a really cool story, and two of my favourite couples! The way it's written is really good, the characters are still the same, even though they're older. Great work! Report Review
Pretty good, im really intrigued as to how Harry has died. Hmmm... mystery... cant wait for the next chapter, make sure you keep an eye on your grammar. Anyway, please update real soon =D 9/10! Report Review
I think this is really good but you ould add a little more detail and watch the grammar, kay? Doing well, keep it up =D 8/10! Report Review
omg! this was awesome! when r u going 2 write more?! please write more! Report Review
please right more this is so good Report Review
A grape, onion, lemon, and squash omlet totally sounds like Luna! I was delighted to see Luna/Ron together in this one. I'm a fan of Harry/Hermoine pairing. You wrote Hermione's character really well, especially at the end before Neville had to spill the dreadful news. I'm interested to see how this stoyry develops, because it was mentioned in the summary she has a chance to undo it. Do update soon. I like fresh plots like this one. Report Review
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